Very nice fic, though I didn't quite easily make the transition from knife to cane. Probably just be me though, I usually need 8-9 handholds just to go up one rung of a story sometimes. :)
I would have so loved Potter being forced to clean Malfoy up (orally) afterwards, but that would probably pushed the rating from NC-17 to X. Purely for more of the domination aspect, of course. But I'll keep that in the back of my mind. :)
Good scene though. If you were looking for any criticisms, all I could add would be smells and hot/colds/texture sensories.
I liked the story, it gave me some plywood before going to bed. I look forward to the next installment. Please have Mr. Potter bring it to me on his knees with an Changing EveryFlavour pablum in his mouth and EverySense buttplug tightly installed.
!~Leatherwish 'If I wanted to play nice, I wouldn't have chosen you.'
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I would have so loved Potter being forced to clean Malfoy up (orally) afterwards, but that would probably pushed the rating from NC-17 to X. Purely for more of the domination aspect, of course. But I'll keep that in the back of my mind. :)
Good scene though. If you were looking for any criticisms, all I could add would be smells and hot/colds/texture sensories.
I liked the story, it gave me some plywood before going to bed. I look forward to the next installment. Please have Mr. Potter bring it to me on his knees with an Changing EveryFlavour pablum in his mouth and EverySense buttplug tightly installed.
!~Leatherwish
'If I wanted to play nice, I wouldn't have chosen you.'
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I'm working on the next part, but it will be a while before I get it out.
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