[Football] O HAY

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My wisdom teeth have officially killed my ability to think, to function or to last more than a few minutes without the right side of my jaw hurting like a motherfucker. WINNAR.

But on the plus side I'm currently in a capslocking, flaily enough mood to post this. It's still in beta mode, so any comments would be appreciated? I DUNNO, GUYS. IT FEELS

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Oh, Pipita.

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Holy shit, I´ll come back to this later. But it´s brilliant. Just know that, for the next few hours until I can do this properly. (heartheartheart)

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So, okay, I hate the very idea of the pairing, but I'm starved of Pipita love, so I clicked, right

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I want to hate this pairing because WTF HOW DOES THAT EVEN MAKE SENSE. But I had these images of the boys in my head and how it could possibly ever work with them getting bought up at the same time and then...2000+ words.

Sergio. Sergio. I never thought too much of him and one day he suddenly became this like ever present fountain of humor for me. And like you said, so unreal in how he presents himself and then sometimes he has a serious expression and I start wondering what's behind those horrible glasses?

I had such issues with settling on how best to describe the awkwardness and settled for this kind of repressed anger that is never brought to the forefront. I want to write more of them because I want to see if I can write a real fight. Because the way things are, there's have to be eventually. At least a sucker punch thrown around after too much crap beer or a bad match or SOMETHING.

Mostly I adore your Pipita like no other. I'm glad you made Gago the dirty (chavvy, lol) ho. da;kjfdiesdies XDDDDDDGONZALO = MY FAVOURITE. IT'S

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you're on my flist and I don't think I can be anything but a River supporter if push comes to shove.

MISSION ACCOMPLISHED YAY.

Nah, I'm actually really intrigued by the possibility of the two boys actually forging a friendship? It would almost be epic, like Roman & Pablito. =___=

:(

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I ... I hate to say it, but reading the comments about forum-hunting and YouTubing and whatnot, I miss the days when I was in love with Pipita and no one else knew who he was. This is my raging resentment at fandom rofl.

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.... okay. i am so, so glad you are not off writing your 1000 words of tenipuri and depriving footie of your brilliance. >:0< you know, the first time you posted fic i was just utterly LOLZ WTF at you behind my hands because i'd never known a wider discrepancy between what the author claimed was the quality of a piece and what the actual quality, uh, was. granted, you claimed it was the worst thing ever. but the writing was pretty damn good too. okay, i've been wanting to tell you that for awhile now. (i didn't think it appropriate for me to try the first time around seeing how i'd, uh, pretty much blundered into your journal being all lunatic and stranger-ly HAHA. ha

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I TRUFAX LU, DANICA. ♥

I don't know. I was being a dumbass about my writing for a long, long time. Mostly because I'd gone so long without really writing anything and then because I was so nervous about posting football fic. And I don't know. I'm kind of insecure in general. For now I'm ignoring all impulses that are telling me not to post things and am happier because of it. :D

gda;gdjaa GONZO. I made myself laugh with that whole thing. Hahaha. I'm happy you think it was funny because a lot of the time I wonder if I'm the only one who thinks my sense of humor isn't lacking. And bzzzzzzzzh if my name was buttered into some unrecognizable muppet name, I'd probably be pissed. All though someone once called me Missy. I wanted to introduce their ass to the pavement. But that is neither here nor there.

And ugdha; there's a touch here that illuminates not just a slash relationship but also the larger, hugely intimidating context in which the two find themselves situated It makes me feel more confident that you feel I was able to put

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ps. the last comment you left on my journal. has killed me utterly.

i am not even joking.

i think if i were to respond to it it would have to be like, FEEDBACK or something, and for something that's not even fic (!!!). "this line. and and. that one. i am ded. pps LOLZ4EVER. ppps SLAVEBOY AU ONO U DINT ALKFKJSAKLFKJ"

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I swear I thought I'd written that as fic until I realized it was just a mess of LOL ZLATAN, YOU WHORE. ♥ I should write that as a drabble at the very least because wtf Zlatan, you do not leave a man like Nesta comments about his dick where other oiled-up Italians can see them and report back to God!Maldini. Or at the very least start giving Gabriella questionable looks concerning her (Zlatan's lol) petnames for her fiance.

And that slaveboy AU is my hommage to cliché olé badfic. So I will definitely be writing more if only for the sake of Nesta placing Zlatan in a whore house for a few hours and making him clean out horse stables. EL OH EL.

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I love this like I love Sergio's delicate pink t-shirts. The juxtaposition of the two relationships. Fernando's with Sergio with its matching Chanel earrings (lasdfsjhlj) and Fendi sunglasses, not to mention the "chess." And then Pipita and Fernando, which is seems darker (in that it exists in a darkened bedroom, giving up blankets as a metaphor for _____), on a deeper level, somehow more vital. Even with the River-scum/Boca-scum, the Gonzo, the “¡GONZO! ¿¡HIJO DE PUTA, QUE HACES?!”, because there's still the strange image of Pipita dousing his sheets in linen, the smell irrestitably drawing Fernando in. The way Fernando immediately couches the smell of linen and flowers in his own terms: that Gonzalo has started wearing cologne, how it doesn't occur to him that there could be another explanation.

Also, when Fernando calls Sergio the 32 million euro man. Such a quick valuation of a human being :| Fernando's implicit assumption that his price tag makes him somehow superior to the two of them.

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Sergio has some truly inspiring clothing. Hanging on my living room wall is a picture of him with slicked back hair, oversized sunglasses, diamond stud earrings and wearing a white zip-up sweater with shiny blue lettering. All while holding a massive man LV manpurse. (And I don't know if I've mentioned this to anyone else, but Sergio may or may not be my universe's Fernando Torres' mentor. He might also be sage and full of inspirational one-liners.)

I've seen those Chanel earrings all over campus and when I was writing that particular section, the girl in front of me, pretending to pay attention in statistic class was wearing some. CLEARLY DESTINY. And I loved playing chess when I was younger (still due, all though I'm rusty and pathetic at it for the time being), so I had to hate someone playing it. And um...I was also listening to a Ricky Martin song with the word chess in the title. (So appropriate for Sergio considering the artist. And was completely the inspiration for Gago's singing.)

The way Fernando immediately couches the

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...I want to see that picture. aha. oh Sergio ;_____; and thank you for the song. I am all about anything cheesy and laid over a bad synth beat.

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