Remember

[teisha_marie]

Finally some more writing. First attempt at an explicit (of sorts) scene. :D
It was so much fun, it totally tickles my pickle.

Comments

Magnificent

[pereybere]

Absolutely powerful imagery, subtle in its eroticism and so profound. Loved:

they would remain forever forbidden to remember, terrified to forget.

almost poetic!!

Truly fantastic!!

Re: Magnificent

[teisha_marie]

Thanks so much!
Though toward the end there, I had the words, but they weren't put together in a way that I liked, so my beta helped and she's amazing!

[volturisfinest]

Beautiful, I really liked your description.

[teisha_marie]

Thankyou so much. :)