FIC: Collision: Chapter Seven (Lotrips/HP, Viggo/Lucius, PG)

Oct 08, 2006 04:51

Collision: Chapter Seven
Authors: darkrosetiger and telesilla
Fandom/ Pairing: Harry Potter/Lotrips crossover; eventually Viggo/Lucius
Archive: Please ask.
Rating: PG
Summary: Viggo and Lucius head up to Idaho. Viggo's brother is less than pleased with Viggo's houseguest, and Viggo and Lucius talk about stuff and things.
Warnings: None.
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hp, collision, lucius, lotrips, viggo

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ravenna_c_tan October 8 2006, 07:05:11 UTC
Absolutely beautiful chapter. My heart was in my throat when Lucius had the vision of Draco. God, to think of the trouble these two could get into on hash brownies, though! (Heh, with or without Sean!)

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raitala October 8 2006, 14:25:36 UTC

nikkie222 October 8 2006, 17:51:48 UTC
Interesting things going on here. The sense of hominess and togetherness was very well-crafted with them settling in, making sandwiches, Viggo waiting up for Lucius, having cocoa, looking at the stars, talking quietly, sharing more. And Lucius making a joke - too cute!

Viggo's defensiveness at how Gerald and Lisa treat Lucius is very telling. The enforced isolation and their shared sense of being an outsider is becoming so comfortable and intimate.

I'm enjoying having a Viggo who is not entirely secure and confident as usually written. I'm also finding I'm really liking Lucius very much. With Sean, even though he was jealous at first, he relaxed and had an enjoyable dinner and conversation with him and they had a great deal in common. I understand his formal manners and reactions to new people like Lisa or Gerald. He understands why people don't like him or want to be around him, but Viggo is teaching him to look inward and change. Lucius is a very complex, well-crafted character.

Thanks, guys. Great chapter!

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brinian October 8 2006, 21:01:44 UTC
I'm really enjoying this. I like how you're exploring the interaction between a squib and his relatives. Likewise how Lucius is thinking about his reactions to a squib from an old family. More please...

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illiadri February 1 2007, 19:11:05 UTC
SO interesting to see these glimpses into Lucius's history. Especially regarding Draco's birth, and the vision. The hints of regret about where he and his family have ended up are affecting, probably because you've included them sparingly. And of course Viggo knowing just what to do to comfort. *happy*

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