A Knack for Things: Chapter 16

[telwyndubois]

Found on UnknowableRoom.org; click here!

I'm appalling, I know. Let's not talk about it.

(P.S. Only a few more chapters to go!)

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[zazenica]

I revived The Age of Inertia after three years of hiatus (that's up on ff.net, though), so if you've only been gone for two, then, well. Y'know. :) Welcome back to the obsession.

[zazenica]

So I read the update, but my browser keeps shouting at me about how there's malware on the UR server, so I'll just bring my comments over here:

You nailed the agony that is applications. I was cringing as McGonagall reminded Lily for the umpteenth time about it - totally felt Lily's pain. What the hell does anyone write about their greatest strengths and weaknesses, anyway? Lulz.

- Now that that's out of the way! I quite enjoyed the dialogue, my dear. It sounds so natural and the characters' voices really come through. But, like James, I do find Lily to be rather obtuse in this chapter. She needs to put him out of his misery already. Haha the poor guy. :/

Looking forward to the last couple of chapters. It's always interesting to see people come back from a long break. :)