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Fic: Every Wise Man's Son Doth Know

Jan 25, 2012 00:36

Fic: Every Wise Man's Son Doth Know
Disclaimer: Sometimes I think this show was created just for me, but alas, still not mine.
Rating/warnings: M for sex.
Pairings: Kendall/James
Notes: This is a belated birthday gift to garnetice, my own personal shoulder devil. ilu. ♥ Also, giant thansk to my beloved beta reader lielabell, who turned my jumble of words into a ( Read more... )

big time rush, fic

Comments 14

lielabell January 25 2012, 06:11:29 UTC

<3 <3 <3 <3

Have I mentioned that I love this? Because I love this. A LOT.

<3 <3 <3 <3

queenitsy January 30 2012, 12:47:30 UTC

<3 <3 <3 <3 And I love YOU. This fic would still be hopelessly broken without you, bb.

second_batgirl January 25 2012, 14:37:29 UTC

I love you SO MUCH.

queenitsy January 30 2012, 12:47:53 UTC

As it happens, I love you TOO.

feverromance January 25 2012, 23:11:08 UTC

So I never replied to Never Did Run Smooth, but that was possibly the best fic I've ever read. It was so good that I read it when I was in bed with a friend and I was doing that so creepily under the covers that I REALLY don't want to know what she thought I was doing...

Anyway. You're fabulous and your writing is fabulous and this fic is EXACTLY what I needed to feel complete. I whimpered a little when Never Did Run Smooth was over, which was stupid because it was super long and I'm not allowed to complain at all, but THIS. This is what finished it. And I am so fucking jealous of the way you write because it's easy to read but so descriptive at the same time. It's simple but so complex and I am in love with you, really. Or well. Your writing. And you for enlightening me with your writing.

And this was really weird, okay, I know. But I just wanted to quote yourself on you:

And with the way Kendall's hands felt on James' body, the note of desperation in the voice, the fact that Kendall was looking at him the way Carlos looked at ( ... )

queenitsy January 31 2012, 03:44:48 UTC

Aaaah, thank you so much. (And bwahahaha at reading under your covers.) I'm really glad you liked this, thanks for taking the time to let me know. ♥

(Trufax: the line after that was going to be "James had never wanted to be devoured so much in his life," but it didn't fit the flow so it got cut.)

breila_rose January 25 2012, 23:12:55 UTC

AHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS!

THIS IS MY SECOND FAVORITE THING IN FANDOM! THE FIRST BEING NEVER DID RUN SMOOTH!

I love that we got a bit of James POV of the first fic and then the rest. How Kendall was all shy and wanting James to make the first move and teasing him about Filipe. And THE PURPLE SMOOTHIE WITH ONE STRAW.

I have HEARTS IN MY EYES, Becky. HEARTS IN MY EYES.

And this was the best thing to have on a sick day. Love you!

♥♥♥

queenitsy January 31 2012, 03:45:40 UTC

YAY I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT!! \o/ And wow, I did not realize it was you favorite. omg. ♥ (And I hope you're feeling better, bb!)

garnetice January 25 2012, 23:27:26 UTC

OH MY GOD BECKY THAT WAS THE SWEETEST THING EVER AND I AM AN EXPLOSION OF HEARTS AND STARS AND RAINBOWS AND LIKE, I DON'T EVEN KNOW NOT EVEN AN EXPLOSION, A SUPERNOVA OF SPARKLES AND LOVE AND I LOVE YOU HOLD ON I CAN'T REMEMBER ENGLISH.

garnetice January 25 2012, 23:32:44 UTC

OKAY, WAIT. English. Eng-lish. The lish of eng. I'm good. Breathing. Breath is back ( ... )

queenitsy January 31 2012, 03:47:59 UTC

HOORAY I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT :D :D :D :D :D

Seriously, this was... not the easiest thing I've written and did not actually turn out how I anticipated, and you saw the thing I linked to about writing sequels, so... very glad you think it turned out well. ♥ And of course HAPPY BIRTHMONTH (but next time I am not doing shots. Probably).