Fic: Thanksgiving Break

[temira]

Title: Thanksgiving Break
Author: queenitsy
Rating: NC17 (graphic sex)
Notes: Dedicated to elvensorceress. Happy late birthday! :D
(Oh. Also: this is technically part of the frat!verse, but since it's PWP, I don't think context is required. I swear, I will write something with a plot soon.)
Summary: If Chad had made a to-do list for Thanksgiving break, having sex with

Comments

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[the_afterlight]

Only one thing, though. First time bottoming and only the lube on a condom? YIKES!!! I hope Ryan at least used spit or something! Everyone uses lubed condoms...but they aren't enough for first time anal sex! Hell, they aren't enough for 15th time anal sex!

YES THIS. I was about to comment with the EXACT SAME THING.

TMI time: I have tried to bottom before with only the lube on the condom, and can I say, "OW FUCKING OW"? Especially without any real kind of stretching. The story was totally hot for me right up to that point, but it took me out of it enough that I really couldn't enjoy the rest.

[queenitsy]

*nod* I can understand that; I've definitely been thrown out of fics like that before. I mentioned why I made the choice I did above, but that's the problem with crossing my fingers for suspension of disbelief. I'm sorry it didn't work in this case, but thank you for letting me know. :)

[hotceltogoth]

Yeah, and don't get me wrong: I think you're an amazing author and the REST of if it incredibly hot. Like I said, I was definitely all, "UNF" up to that point, and I would have been through the rest of it if it weren't for that moment where I was going, "OHFUCKNO."

So it's really more of a case for something in fiction not working for me than any comment on your writing. :D I mean, I can understand why you made the choice you did. For most people in fandom, it probably WOULD be enough to suspend their disbelief.