Comments | tempus_viator: you gave me a life i never chose

tempus_viator

you gave me a life i never chose

Jul 19, 2011 19:33

Title: you gave me a life i never chose
Fandom: Glee
Rating: M. Violence and sexual themes.
Pairings: Rachel/Quinn
Word Count: 5kish.
Spoilers: AU.
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Summary: Serial Killer!Quinn. Lucy is a murderer and Quinn is the protector. Rachel is just her lifelong downfall.

( your mouth is poison, your mouth is wine )

glee, fanfic, pairing: rachel/quinn

Comments 17

bsfan July 20 2011, 20:53:48 UTC

Well this is really different. It's a welcome change, but I have to say I'm very happy she didn't kill Rachel (or Santana). I enjoyed this, and now I know I can reread it because Rachel doesn't die. A part of me wants more, but then I won't know if she's safe. Dilemma.

tempus_viator July 22 2011, 23:07:08 UTC

I think I'd be too much of a sap to kill Rachel. Or not. I mean, I've killed off Quinn before so...

Thanks for reading :)

volando_voy July 21 2011, 05:11:10 UTC

This was AMAZING! I think I saw it reblogged on somebody's tumblr the other day, didn't realize you had written it! There are so many things I love about this piece I can't even. Oh, Quinn. She's like the poster child for what happens when you become dead inside. I kind of want to hug her and run away from her at the same time.

(And I'm so, so sorry it's taken me forever to return ch 3 of YWSH! It will be in your box in the next couple hours.)

tempus_viator July 22 2011, 23:09:46 UTC

I want to run away with Quinn too :D

.. as long as it's a sane Quinn and not one that will take me to a forest and make me disappear. But, y'know. Otherwise it's all good.

tashamiller2k July 21 2011, 10:33:57 UTC

Awesomely creepy.

Honestly I was a little surprised Rachel made it, I was sort of expecting it to end in her brutal murder.
Still I liked that it was Quinn continuing to protect her from Lucy, sweet in an incredibly twisted way.

tempus_viator July 22 2011, 23:09:00 UTC

Yeah, it definitely seemed like it was heading towards Quinn killing Rachel, didn't it? I didn't really look over it again but midway during the final scene, I changed the ending. Originally, it did lead to Rachel dying. So ;)

Thanks for reading :)

t8kmybreathaway July 23 2011, 01:51:01 UTC

Definitely interesting, I think to some extent that you could keep running with it... maybe where Rachel actually loves her so much that she's willing to help her keep her secret and "sate" the beast within. Maybe? I don't know but you see those tv shows on about how these couples go and do these horrible things and kill people and what not (my girlfriend has a morbid fascination with said shows). Anyway just a though, I don't think Rachel would ever take part in the killing but I do believe she loves Quinn and wants to protect her.

Anyhow, please feel free to write between the hours of 12-3am any time. This was interesting and different. I liked it.