what strength did I lack?

Dec 12, 2009 17:34

Crit post for both tenacious_stray and strayedingly.

Comment screening on, IP logging off, anonymous enabled. Feel free to tear me a new one, but please try to keep things constructive. I probably won't respond to any comments (unless I have a question), but I will take any and all suggestions into account. Thanks!
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