This past weekend

[tenandtonic]

In haiku:
Drove quickly to Sioux Falls
Watched Derby Girls win the close bout
Drove home to tuna salad

Comments

[notbatman]

Fragments in three lines
Don't make a proper haiku
It's five-seven-five

[jamesonrocks]

I thought the same thing -- he did it with words rather than syllables.

Mostly it just made me miss your work haikus

[notbatman]

Mostly it just made me miss your work haikus

Dude, that's just cold. I'm pretty sure he reads this LJ!

[jamesonrocks]

Oh, there's nothing wrong with T&T's. It just made me think of haikus in general and you had a period of cranking out some that really rocked (in their broken, broken way as I recall...)