Comments | tenebraeli: Damn New Earth and its evil plot kittens

tenebraeli

Damn New Earth and its evil plot kittens

Apr 19, 2006 11:11

I would say plot bunnies, but well.... *g*

I have once again committed fic. Someone should really just shoot me.

Title - Pomegranate Seeds
Author - Tenebraeli
Rating - G
Pairing - N/A
Characters - The Doctor (10) & Rose

Spoilers for 'New Earth'

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( It isn't the kiss that bothers her... )

my fanfic, new earth, doctor who

Comments 26

cryptile April 19 2006, 18:24:26 UTC

Because she knows now that he has stopped fighting the label of 'god'. He has embraced it.

What she remembers from the ancient tales of gods and goddesses is that the humans who get involved with them nearly always pay a terrible cost. And as they walk, as he tucks her hand into the curve of his arm, she wonders what the coin will be, when it comes her time to pay.

You WIN. You brilliant brilliant scary person.

tenebraeli April 21 2006, 03:07:23 UTC

You are much too kind, but thank you, thank you, thank you!

sarah531 April 19 2006, 18:39:05 UTC

And she can't help but worry what her role will be. High priestess, worshipper, sacrifice? She can't leave him. She's like Persephone, she sees that now. Forever changed.

OMG- so true. Meep.

Very good!

tenebraeli April 21 2006, 03:10:41 UTC

Thank you!

*happy!dance*

deadflowerss April 19 2006, 19:26:56 UTC

*Blinks*
OMFG!
I love this so much.

First decent Ten fix I have read-that is spot on about everything I think about this new Doctor,but have been unable to put into words as eloquent as your own.

Because she knows now that he has stopped fighting the label of 'god'. He has embraced it.
I adore you for that line.

And she can't help but worry what her role will be. High priestess, worshipper, sacrifice? She can't leave him. She's like Persephone, she sees that now. Forever changed.

And as they walk, as he tucks her hand into the curve of his arm, she wonders what the coin will be, when it comes her time to pay.

I love that too,I better stop or I will just quote the whole thing back at you.
Going to add to my memories,and do you mind if I recc it in my journal?
Thank you so much for sharing.xx

tenebraeli April 21 2006, 03:19:22 UTC

**blushes so much that my head explodes**

Erm. Sorry about the mess there. Thank you very, very, very, very much!

And of course you can link/rec it! That's a very high compliment!

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tenebraeli April 21 2006, 03:20:03 UTC

Thank you, so much!

aervir April 19 2006, 19:39:17 UTC

Wow. That's a very insightful analysis of the Doctor's new hubris, and the last line actually makes me shiver.

tenebraeli April 21 2006, 03:20:53 UTC

Ooh, shivers... wonderful side-effect! Thank you!

And that is a very appropriate icon too.