I write a poem to sum up my thoughts

[tenessa]

fragile ego
illtempered mind
damaged phychy
dependant soul

centered self
unbalanced time
no passions
focused drone

lacking substance
without words of self
unknowledgable
educated waste

crumpled paper
filled with letters
forgotton on the desk
now in the trash

Comments

[mtelobo]

sad but interesting

[lostraven]

Ego not so important
Emotions need understanding
Psychy repairable,
Dependence curbed

Your needs quite important
Balance always difficult
Passions hidden
by focusing on the familiar

Substance overrated
when 'self' becomes singular
Capable
and more confidant in your education

Leave the paper crumpled
and forget all those letters
Clean off your desk
Empty the trash and start anew...my friend.

Most sincerely,
-Shawn

[tenessa]

Thanks :) For the reply and for the insight. *hugz*