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Spilled Coffee and Arrogant Hotshots Part II for the Community!

Mar 27, 2016 20:07

Title: Spilled Coffee and Arrogant Hotshots Part II
Author: arysthaeniru
Recipient: The Community!
Pairing/Characters: Tachibana An/Kirihara Akaya, (minor characters) Osakada Tomoka, Tachibana Kippei, Marui Bunta
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: grumpy characters, mentions of fighting
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all, including the 112,823 chocolates he received for ( Read more... )

marui, !fic, tachibana an, tachibana, kirihara, tomoka, !pg-13

Comments 5

ssumiya March 27 2016, 18:41:57 UTC

THIS WAS ADORABLE. Gosh kudos for wirting het in a m/m-ruled fandom which fandom isn't. I hate how little love het usually get because there are so many good stories out there and laskdjfhdjskjf Also An is super tricky to write ^^;; I love how their relation builts up and they get past their difficulties. Akaya being a fan was adobrs and Yukimura throwing him off a helipcoter is just so pausible and yes Renji manager. You did so good that I'm still grinning like an idiot after reading this much fluff.

Kookyhara pffff I saw what you did there and I loved it and i may die in peace

Great story anon!!!

arysthaeniru April 5 2016, 03:49:38 UTC

An is super tricky to write, but once you have a grip of her character, it's much more fun to pull her in different directions and let her take over the story-telling. I love strong women so much :') Akaya and An also being fans of each other was something I wanted to develop, but didn't really know how to fit in + time restraints....so that was that :')
You liking fluff-fest is like the biggest compliment, so thank you so so soooo much~

I'M IN BTS HELL AND NOBODY IS STOPPING ME

ssumiya April 7 2016, 01:51:23 UTC

Yes. Absolutely. Me. Enjoying Fluff. Dear heavens. You are ruining me for other fics.

and my life with other fics OTL. I'M LAUGHING SO HARD AT YOU... and crying inside, because you dragged me there too OTL ilusm

quelleperedhil March 28 2016, 20:44:16 UTC

The banter in this was A+!!!

I absolutely adored everything about this -- somehow Kirihara as a cello player was kind of perfect. Oh god Kirihara NO THAT IS NOT HOW YOU FLIRT. STOP IT WITH THE BAD LINES I CANT

An was so sassy that in my head I said burn after half of the things that she said. Their text conversation KILLED ME

Absolutely fantastic, anon. This was a joy to read!

arysthaeniru April 5 2016, 03:53:43 UTC

I enjoyed writing the banter a bit too much, An and Kirihara are both really snappy, though I think An was winning here, just by sheer force of power. And man, Kirihara would be a great cello player, it takes a lot of emotion, and he has plenty of it. And I was cringing as I wrote them, I hate pick-up-lines with a passion, so it was very difficult :')

I'm so so glad you enjoyed this, thanks for reading :D