Originally Normal 9/11

[tennyo_elf]

Title: Originally Normal
Beta: Science, Puddin, and TJBW (lots of credit goes to these three, they did a wonderful job editing this story)
Rating: FRT
Genre: Season 7 AU
Summary: It's been a year since season 6 and things are going OK for Buffy. That is until things start going wrong and someone finally comes back into her life

Comments

[sarian71]

"Buffy rested her head on his chest and listened to his beating heart, not caring that he had so brazenly taken her into his embrace. His arms and body were warm and comforting. She felt safe enough to just be."

That was such a lovely moment in the middle of a intense chase scene. I loved when Buffy admitted that they are more than friends.

Buffy was no longer in control of herself."

What a great twist! I didn't see that coming at all! I just kept waiting that awful moment when Spike would fall under mind control. But he was immune to it! And then Buffy lost the rest of her powers... I was so relieved when Spike managed to snap her out of it. His speech was very powerful. As was the moment when Buffy came back to herself!

[tennyo_elf]

I really felt like I had to clear the air between them with where they stood. This scene kind of just came naturally. I was kind of surprised at it myself.

I loved that twist myself too! I had always known that Buffy would be the one to be mind controlled but that she'd strong enough to break free. I wanted people to feel like no matter the situation you are in, your mind is a strong weapon and that everyone has the strength to break free. <3

Super happy you are continuing to enjoy!

[waddiwasiwitch]

Great chapter. Sorry though it's ending soon. LOL.

[tennyo_elf]

Yay, thank you!

I'm sorry it's ending too, since I'll be on spuffy break for awhile! Everyone has been awesome! <3