"I could try to forget what you do when I let you get through to me, but then you do it over again"

[tenshibattosai]

Our doubts were always our traitors, weren't they. They say distance makes the heart grow fonder, but how is that possible when the gap never seems to close? I want to see you, now. But I know that's not possible.

On that note, I took a little time to whip up a little mini-story to see how my writing still is these days. A little feedback would be

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[tenshibattosai]

Lol, who said romance had to be cute and caring? *smiles wryly* Was that really the impression you got out of it?

And it's called an LJ cut. Uhm... How to explain it... (I believe it used to be different the last time I used one. *amused*) Well, it's the button beside the table button when you're writing your entry. If you run your mouse over it, you know, hold it there for a second, it should say "LiveJournal Cut" Press that, and, well, you label the link, and whatever you write in the cut is highlighted in grey now, apparently. (Very different than it used to be >_>) If you look very carefully at the left indent side, there should be an empty space with a faint vertical line of dots or something. That signals the beginning, and then later, the end of your cut. It just sections off your post so you access the rest of it through the extension link.

And don't worry about huge-ass posts. They don't clog up my friends entries. Much. Not that many people even have qualms about doing it. I gave up a long time ago, haha.

[tenshibattosai]

Awee :) "Dramaramamamama"?

*backs away slowly*

[tenshibattosai]

Haha, really now. :) I'd like to see how you handle long-distance relationships. Then again, I sincerely doubt you have the same level of self-doubt and insecurity that I happen to have. I have that pretty bad. It's a curse, I swear.

And many of my stories are based off of one or two quotes or thoughts, or maybe even everyday conversation. Sometimes I even put phrases in from conversations I have. I usually twist meanings to actually make a story, but this is a pretty unusual piece 'cause it's so short. There are actually about 6 lines taken out of real life in this. Can you guess which ones? :)

[tenshibattosai]

LOL *long exasperated sighhhhh*, you really need to snag him up before he runs away. :P

LOL riiight, right. :D You'll be fine. ^^ And my insecurity is more like...

OMGWTFI"MGONNADIE I"M GONNA DIEE, WHY AM I HERE, omfg I can't do thisI can't dothisIcan'tdothisIcan'tdothishehatesmehehatesmehehatesmeWHYY did I think I could do this? This is such a mistake. I can't believe I agreed to this. I'm going to fail. I'm going to fail. I'mgoingtofail. I'm going to..." *silence* *high-pitched keening wail*