[ongoing] Let the Game Begin- (1/?)

Jul 12, 2011 01:19


a/n: I'll try my best to update weekly. yes. weekly. :) Comments are loved.

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CHAPTER 1: Insult

So she likes lacy undergarments huh? I wonder if she wears matching undergarments.. )

let_the_game_begin, ninoxoc, fanfiction

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amtopm_xx July 11 2011, 18:48:07 UTC
I'm not gonna lie. I was confused for the first half of the chapter, but I caught on XD Probably because I read to fast haha.

But I want the second chapter NOW. I love the way you wrote Nino. It's interesting how some people write him as a meanish brat, some as a sarcastic brat, some as a funny but kind brat. (the common thread here being BRAT). Can't wait for an update =D

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tenshii_chan July 12 2011, 15:10:19 UTC
oh. . . sorry if its a bit confusing at the start, since this fic is a kind of series from Sho's fic, i need to establish some connection..but you need not read it, since the two story line is independent from each other..
... )

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a_k_k_h_n July 11 2011, 21:18:44 UTC
spot for tonight!

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tenshii_chan July 12 2011, 15:17:37 UTC
hehe. thanks haku-chan :) i hope it won't confuse you..

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a_k_k_h_n July 12 2011, 20:55:08 UTC
hhaa it did, just a little :P But I think I get it :D

lovely chapter <3
I cannot wait for more, I hope everything in my brain will clear up in the next couple of chaps :P

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tenshii_chan July 13 2011, 12:20:17 UTC
oh.. i see, sorry about the confusing parts (which i guess was the first part?) well, i hope the upcoming chapters will be able to answer all your questions :)

hehe,again, thanks for reading..

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esther_ting July 12 2011, 03:08:49 UTC
Awww... I cant wait for the next chapter!!! Haha. Its interesting to see how nini will react to the girl now tt he knows who she is :-) thanks for sharing :-)

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tenshii_chan July 12 2011, 15:23:00 UTC
hehe. thanks esther-chan (i hope you don't mind me calling you that)..

hmm, you'll see more of his reaction on chapter 2, which i'll try to post on monday. gomen ne~ my connection is super low.. :( so it really depends if lj will load.

PS. Did the first part confuse you?

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esther_ting July 13 2011, 14:51:37 UTC
haha, esther chan is ok with mi! It sounds cute~ =D yay!! I shall have something to look forward to on Monday! =) Chase away the monday blues!!! =D Oh, I was only confused with the prologue (the game part), then I realised it was a game :D Haha, after that I was not confused at all. I was really glad to see the mix of the storyline with classmates! I love that fic sooooo much!! Its so good to see it kinda "revived"! =D

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tenshii_chan July 13 2011, 16:11:40 UTC
yey:) esther-chan:) but if you have a nickname that is shorter than that, its fine too.
... )

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sakuraisha_251 July 12 2011, 10:58:49 UTC
Hwohh~ so Nino didn't recognize her if not for her to introduce herself? -.-'

I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen between them! :D

Thanks for sharing~

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tenshii_chan July 12 2011, 15:29:25 UTC
yup. :) he didn't recognized him, since it was a long time ago, plus, he's still had his feelings for Shi right? :)

oh. i'll try to update as soon as my connections allow it, these past days, it has been too slow, and lj post don't even load.. so its really testing my patience. huhu. i just hope, it will be fixed soon.

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raene_9 July 12 2011, 11:12:47 UTC
uwaaahhh! Neener's perv & brat mode!perfect!
now i'm curious if she's w/ a meeting w/ them...& about what?
loved my baby here...hahaha
can't wait for the next chap...Aibaby you're really a sweet guy.

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tenshii_chan July 12 2011, 15:35:50 UTC
haaha. im glad you love this chapter. Oh well, its been a while since he felt that way right? so i really thought nino deserves to have those kind of moments sometimes.. which turned out as a start of their story, imagine, their first encounter after so many years to be like that? heheh..

yep. I especially wrote that part of AIBA here, since this chapter had been written for so long, i just included that part:)

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