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Simple Offer - Chapter 6

Aug 20, 2009 09:19

*hides behind text*

Title: Simple Offer
Rating: NC17 overall (PG 13 this chapter)
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Warnings: Spoilers for the series, Yaoi, AU
Disclaimer: I'm playing with them, I don't OWN them.

Summary: A little offer and what came out of it.

~Sixth Time~

( “Love is love - no matter where it came from.” )

warning: yaoi, pairing: ed/roy, story: simple offer, pairing: roy/ed

Comments 4

amethyst_koneko August 21 2009, 03:31:51 UTC

Come back here you! I see you hiding! XD

*sigh* Roy just can't resist making the snarky comments. -_- He's lucky Ed only went as far as the park. As embarrassed as he was, Ed coulda stormed off and hidden himself just about anywhere and Roy and Maes wouldn't have found him until he was good and ready for them TO find him. I'm just glad they're all under one roof and talking now. Maybe there's hope for them after all! :)

tenshishanai August 21 2009, 06:02:43 UTC

damn.. and here I thought I was small enough to hide behind the big letters....*chuckle*

No Roy can't resist them 'cause it's all he does with Ed... and Ed... well... I don't think that he would hide somewhere... it was either the library (meeting Al when he's upset? definitely a no) or somewhere close to Roy's home and a park just fits in perfectly... 'cause Arakawa-sensei never had mentioned anything about Ed when he's upset and storms off... Al would go to the river or something like that... at least he did in the first anime XD

Oh yeah they're talking... but I don't know if you will like the next chapter *is mean again to everyone of them* -.- *sigh*

confused irishmoon7 August 22 2009, 06:06:47 UTC

umm... why is this titled chapter 7 when it's chapter 6? I clicked the (6) after chapter 5 and it came here. What happened? Confusion aside I like your story! The next update won't take as long as the last one will it? Oh well, it's worth waiting for.

Re: confused tenshishanai August 22 2009, 12:03:37 UTC

ahhh.. sorry ^^; It's just a wrong number in the title... sorry.. this is chapter 6... I didn't even notice that there was a wrong number... *sigh* so sorry...

I *hope* it won't take as long.. but as I am working on Two Colonels and Simple Offer at the same time it will take its time ^^ sorry ^^;

But I'm already working on the right chapter 7 XD