And so I don't know why this fanart turned out so crappy

[tenshiyaki]

I've been trying to switch between lineart and just painting without lines and I dunno... something's not working.

Comments

[diavana]

i think the colors are fine, actually--- I think you need to work on your inked lines. They're a bit clumsy looking. Did you do it digitally? You can always kind of tell when its a digital inking as opposed to hand inking.

[tenshiyaki]

Ahh I see. I did it hand inking actually lol. So I'll need to work on that. How's Megiddo coming along btw? xD;

[diavana]

Ah, no offense, but the inked lines looks like they were done in Photoshop on a tablet-- which is basically clumsy looking if not done right. I say look at some anime art books and study how they create their lines with digital coloring. I don't know if you've gotten any inking done for any of your art classes, but look into how and WHEN to vary your line work.

Megiddo's coming along-- I keep redoing pages because... I like doing that, and I need to stop it if I'm gonna get it done XD;

[tenshiyaki]

I see, all right. Thanks for the tips! I'll look into some art books... I was hasty on this one and should have paid more attention to varying lines.

Haha cool! I can't wait to see your pages! :DDD I haven't seen any sequential art from you before. :)

[tenshiyaki]

Aw thanks... do you know what exactly is wrong with the eyes? D:

[tenshiyaki]

Ah ok. I'm gonna try to fix that.

[wabisuke]

IT'S TOO HAPPY. THEY'RE STANDING IN THE SKY AND WEARING YELLOW.

Uh, people already said stuff. It's cute.

[tenshiyaki]

TOO HAPPY EH? Let me just add sum destroyed Tokyo Tower and crucification in the background thar. :DDD

[wabisuke]

YAY!! Copypasta violence and despair~~