the "we should be whispering" appendix

[tequilideas]

hi again, I'm working on this thing and it's not QUITE done yet, but it has already become clear that I can't use my favorite part. for a lot of reasons, but mostly it's just irrelevant and disrupts the narrative flow, so whatever, I sacrificed. but my loss is your gain, or something! because here's the bit I cut out, completely out of context,

Comments

[viva_gloria]

I love the original fic (which I read offline, without the accompanying footnotes) even more on second read-through -- I especially love your enraged Arthur -- and oh, the footnote-stories are made of win. Especially the bats. And the shared interest in dumb animals such as Eames.

"If they’re not sure they could wind up like us.”
“And we’re horrible,” Arthur says.
“We really are,” Eames says

Lovely, funny, sweet and honest. And completely fucked up, but at least now they admit it :)

[karmic_fic]

Such wonderful additions to a lovely fic!