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[teshara]

So, I wrote a bit of poetry for a Bowie tribute.

I need concrit.

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[siliconshaman]

Um... first line. Was that meant to be 'cock' or clock?

[teshara]

Mark looked at me funny too. I guess it must be a western thing.

Old timey belief was that roosters call to wake the sun up and if the rooster was dead, the dawn would never come an the world would be plunged into darkness.

[siliconshaman]

I suspect it's because Bowie's role as the Goblin King was described as two of his notable 'parts'... so to speak. [it's the tight pants you see.]

[teshara]

No one should put away that cock. It should be near Rasputins in a museum somewhere LOL!