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roomfor2 June 7 2007, 09:44:47 UTC
oh my, you wrote the emotions of this so beautifully. I could just feel what Orlando was going through and it made my heart clench. I totally understand why you had writers block over this, but you did a wonderful job, Tessa.

*goes to read the next bit*

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tessa111 June 7 2007, 11:30:47 UTC
Thanks so much. Yes, I was pretty blocked for a while so I feel relieved to have written through it - and even more relieved now that it has got a positive response! :)

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roomfor2 June 7 2007, 11:36:42 UTC
Seriously, I was right there with him feeling his panic and pain. You did a great job! *thumbs up and lots of cookies*

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tessa111 June 7 2007, 13:45:58 UTC
Awwww, thank you *munches on cookies*

And I love that you comment on each chapter when I post 2 - most people skip straight to the next one and I loose out on half the comments :P

Thanks :)

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anchovy_eater June 7 2007, 12:33:33 UTC
WOW! You captured the true essence of what happened! Great job! :)

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tessa111 June 7 2007, 13:46:44 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you think so :)

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rocketbalm June 7 2007, 14:47:00 UTC
you can't even imagine the joy I felt when I saw that you posted, I'm thrilled that you're writing is as good, if not better, than I remember. Orlando's panic attack was brilliantly written, I had difficulty to breathe through the whole thing. Their emotions are so near the surface and everything is so fragile. Great, great job. Thank you so much for continuing this. You are amazing.

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tessa111 June 7 2007, 17:37:24 UTC
Oh gosh; I'm blushing from the nice feedback. Thank you so much :)

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queen_mean_jean June 7 2007, 15:27:36 UTC
Mercy.... this was a beautiful chapter!! I cried almost all the way through reading it... I love these two silly men... Lovely lovely story!!!
*squishes you*

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tessa111 June 7 2007, 17:39:44 UTC
Thanks a lot. Nice to hear you cried... I mean liked :)

You did see that 42 is also posted right? I'm only saying because sometimes people miss a chapter when I post twice at once - and normally they comment on the second post rather than the first (if you did see and read please ignore my paranoia!)

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encelade2 June 7 2007, 16:39:20 UTC
Tessa,it's official,I love you!I'd send you the best swiss chocolate,if it wasn't so hot where you live.But consider I did!:D
Michael doesn't make things too easy for Orlando,the scene sounds right,emotions and true feelings are so difficult to express,especially for stupid stubborn shy guys,alas for them...
Now I take some paper bags,just in case,and run to the following chapter.

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tessa111 June 7 2007, 17:42:10 UTC
Mmmm lovely Swiss chocolate. Thank you - and thank you for the positive feedback. I'm so glad I didn't disappoint seeing as I left you waiting for so long!

*hugs*

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