Hey, Tessa! I'm so happy to see you were able to work through your writer's block and give us more of this wonderful story :) Still love it to pieces!
The way you described Orlando's panic attack was enough to make me have trouble breathing as well. It felt so real. And Michael sitting behind him with his hands on Orlando's chest...well, it made a nice picture and was very touching to see how much he still cares, whether he's ready to admit it or not.
I'm glad they were able to start talking. And it was good to see that Michael still can't keep his hands out of Orlando's hair :) But who could, given the chance?
I nearly stopped breathing myself during Orlando's panic attack. And I think I was just so relieved when he was able to break down and cry in front of Michael. And thank God that Michael can hold him and try to help him. It makes me feel almost hopeful that somehow things might work out between them
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Gosh. I don't even know how to respond to such a compliment.
Evoking emotions and making people think is indeed the reason for writing and i am so glad if I have accomplished that with this story.
Yes, it is my first attempt at writing so I'm glad (and rather surprised) that it has been so well received. And I do have an amazing beta who helps me - and stops me from looking a fool in public with all my strange spellings etc. (you should have seen it before she jumped in; it was a mess!)
I don't know if I will write something else once this is finished but the positive responses I have received have definitely made me more comfortable with trying. I have learned a lot from writing it so I feel I am better equipped now if I should start a new project in the future (if a story comes to mind).
Thank you so very much for all your kind words. *hugs*
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I'm so happy to see you were able to work through your writer's block and give us more of this wonderful story :) Still love it to pieces!
The way you described Orlando's panic attack was enough to make me have trouble breathing as well. It felt so real. And Michael sitting behind him with his hands on Orlando's chest...well, it made a nice picture and was very touching to see how much he still cares, whether he's ready to admit it or not.
I'm glad they were able to start talking. And it was good to see that Michael still can't keep his hands out of Orlando's hair :) But who could, given the chance?
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Evoking emotions and making people think is indeed the reason for writing and i am so glad if I have accomplished that with this story.
Yes, it is my first attempt at writing so I'm glad (and rather surprised) that it has been so well received. And I do have an amazing beta who helps me - and stops me from looking a fool in public with all my strange spellings etc. (you should have seen it before she jumped in; it was a mess!)
I don't know if I will write something else once this is finished but the positive responses I have received have definitely made me more comfortable with trying. I have learned a lot from writing it so I feel I am better equipped now if I should start a new project in the future (if a story comes to mind).
Thank you so very much for all your kind words. *hugs*
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