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THE WAY WE ARE (ch 26b - 27)

Jun 19, 2006 00:18

TITLE:                       The Way We Are

AUTHOR:                  Tessa

PAIRING:                  Orlando / Michael (OMC)

RATING:                   NC 17

WARNING:               None but slash!

SUMMARY (story): Orlando meets Michael and is forced to re-evaluate who he really is - can he accept that, how far is he willing to go - and is he prepared to ( Read more... )

the way we are

Comments 44

eenoogje June 18 2006, 20:30:45 UTC

This is really wonderful. I love loooooong stories, so stop apologizing for it ;-)
And their first time was lovely, tender and sweet and hot!!!

tessa111 June 19 2006, 04:39:46 UTC

Thanks a lot - that description was pretty much what I was aiming at for their first time, ahhh.
Okay, I'll stop worrying about the length... can't please everyone so I'll just stick with my style - glad it suits you.

violettefemme June 19 2006, 03:22:35 UTC

I literally hollered, "YEAH!" when I saw this was updated. I've been like a little puppy tied up outside the general store waiting for their master to come take them for walkies! This is just one of my very very favorites and I've missed it so!

Anyways, you did not let us down. Michael and Orlando were so sweet together and I lvoe the banter and the way they communicate.

This is really just an exceptionally good read. :-)

Thanks.

Also,

More more more!

tessa111 June 19 2006, 09:51:02 UTC

You hollered, tied up puppy, one of your favoirites. ooh, I'm blushing happily. Thanks so much - glad you enjoy.
There will be more, more and more but it will take a while. I am a slow writer and would rather post more at the time and then less often. Hope you wait around.
Thanks again for commenting.

m_annariel June 19 2006, 05:11:01 UTC

Just lovely that detail about toothbrush and surely cute the Orlando's method to get atention.
The Orli's first time was so tender, and Michael so careful and attentive and selfless. I love them together!!!

Tessa great chapters!!!!! I love this story a lot and always wait for more

“I can’t I have to go home and take Sidi out”.

“You should have just brought him”.

*laugh crazily*

tessa111 June 19 2006, 09:53:27 UTC

Thanks so much m annariel. I'm glad you liked the chapters - and also happy you like them together (I feel you're coming around to Michael more!). He's really not all bad....
Very pleased you continue to read - and take the time to comment.

m_annariel June 19 2006, 16:41:35 UTC

Yeah, I like Michael better, as he tries best Orli, more I like him heh

Hey dear you definitly deserve comments, a lot of them, you write marvelous, I impaciently wait your updates ;P
Tell me, with the time will there has a reverse position in lovemaking? because that Michael look so 'macho' and poor Orli so vulnerable haha

I love this ;)
greetings

Annariel

tessa111 June 21 2006, 16:08:52 UTC

Possibly with time, there will be a change in their love making, will have to wait and see....

gingerale2u June 19 2006, 10:35:39 UTC

What a perfect birthdaygift to ME.. not only one chapter but four!!!!!
I´ve been waiting for this to be updated for the longest time and started to worry if you lost inspriration or something.

You really shouldn´t worry so much about your ability to write because many of us who reads this are simply not responding to every chapter but we still want to read the darn thing!!

Love - Lorelai

tessa111 June 19 2006, 14:41:27 UTC

Happy birthday - glad I could provide a small pressant...and thanks for commenting. No the inspiration is still there, the time to get it onto paper however is lacking so I can't post very often.
I will try and stop worrying about the writing, but it's difficult. I'm never quite able to see the story/chapters myself so I worry - also, I just worry by nature! It's nice to know people are reading and enjoying the story even if I don't know about them. The darn thing will be continued.
Thanks again, Lorelai.

idlesloth June 19 2006, 15:44:48 UTC

Oh, where to start?
Michael was inside him, holding him, kissing his neck, and he had never felt so close, so connected to anyone in his life, had never experienced anything more intimate. Were they supposed to male love like this, was it supposed to feel this good, this right? It wasn't just sex, it was being close.../i>
He had fucked Orlando... It was sex, but it had felt differently. Though he had been inside Orlando, it somehow felt reversed, like Orlando had also been inside him. A constant tightening in his chest.
guh guh guhhity guh
And oh, dear, a glimpse into poor Michael's less than happy past :(

p.s. Have I mentioned to you my embarrassing crush on your fic?