Chapter Three - Hatsukoi Limited

Dec 20, 2009 10:44

Title: 初恋 Limited
Pairings: Akame, Kame/Nao Tsukioka, mentions of Hiroto Kanzaki/Nao Tsukioka (Tatta Hitotsu no Koi)
Notes: This story is set to start in year 2006. Instead of Jin, it was Kame who went on hiatus from JE.
Summary: Sequel to the songfic entitled Vector. Kame left the hospital after learning that Jin impregnated a random girl he met ( Read more... )

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lovekame02 December 20 2009, 03:02:01 UTC
wow, you update it!!! i like it very much!!! i want to read more!!! (^_^)

sorry for that crappy comment, i'm really sleepy cause is very late here, it's 5 am here and i can't think something good to write!! ^_^ ;

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tesshi December 21 2009, 01:04:07 UTC
uwaa~ i saw you comment so fast yesterday but i was on a deadline and couldn't reply to you immediately! *sweat drop* because i only like... squeezed in this update so fast-- wrote it in less than 30 minutes *laughs*

there's no such thing as crappy comment! i'm just happy you commented ♥ hope you slept well yesterday! :3

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chrisrenheb December 20 2009, 03:13:16 UTC
I feel for Kame and yet I feel for Jin also.
Oi, conflicting and making my head hurt.
Loved it as usual.
Thanks for sharing.

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tesshi December 21 2009, 01:08:04 UTC
aww Chris! *pats* sorry for the conflicts *laughs* i firmly believe conflicts and Akame always come together! nyahahaha~
you're welcome! ♥

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shi_koi December 20 2009, 03:19:09 UTC
--starry eyes-- Wow! I love this story. It's officially my favourite one out of all the ones you've written thus far.

I adore your characterisations of Jin and especially Kazuya. --grin-- Poor Kazuya, being backed in a corner (sometimes literally --laughs--) by Jin. Is it wrong of me to absolutely love it when Jin's being all forceful with Kazuya? =^_~=

Thank you so, so much for updating this. Darling, you're brilliant. --excited huggle--

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tesshi December 21 2009, 01:13:04 UTC
aww~ ♥ thanks! i'm really happy to know that *shot*

lol~ i was wondering when someone will catch that (Jin cornering Kame literally!) and i'm happy someone did! ♥ i love the way i wrote Jin here *shot* he's like... a big bully and he's just... aklshdhdf!~ haha, sorry for the key smash. i love bully!Jin soooooo much no, it's totally not wrong the love Jin's attitude towards Kame because i do too! :3

you're welcome! *huggles back* thank you so much for your sweet comment! *more hugs*

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shi_koi December 22 2009, 04:58:33 UTC
--laughs-- No problem. Comments are mana, aren't they? Or, as someone once said in the BtVS fandom, they're 'the coin of the realm' by which you/we are paid, ne?

Oh yeah, I caught the literal cornering. --waggles eyebrows--

Oooh, I like the sound of that. Huh, bully!Jin sounds quite neat. Like...he's not evil, but ebil instead. A distinction, but a fun one. --ebil cackles--

--gives thumbs up-- I think your bully!Jin rocks. I should feel sorry for poor dear Kazuya...but honestly? I can't. I want to see him taken advantage of by possessive!bully!Jin. --laughs--

sorry for taking so long to reply, I got sidetracked with watching BtR

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tesshi December 22 2009, 08:24:25 UTC
yes! that is so true. pity the other readers don't realize that (;_;)

haha ♥ yes, me too, i totally want Jin to be as unreasonable as he is with Kame *bricked*

aww, i don't mind! (^_~)v have fun watching BtR con... can you believe i actually didn't like it *shot* but that's probably onle because i like Cartoon KAT-TUN II You best....

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puffie_hanchan December 20 2009, 03:42:09 UTC
like the update :D ♥ but it's a bit short :p will wait for the next one.

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tesshi December 21 2009, 01:23:22 UTC
aww~ glad you did! rofl~ yeah, i know it's short compared to the first chapter, that is! :) but i'll try to make it longer next chapter haha, i was rushing to write this for about 30 minutes only and then i had to go back working because my sister was freaking out because i was not able to meet the deadline last time so she was forcing me to write early! *giggles*

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tesshi December 21 2009, 01:38:40 UTC
Aya~ ♥

no worries, i know you're quite busy touring Florida or have you gone back to your home already? hahaha, i'm kinda a failure in keeping up with my f-list due to work (T_T)

haha, yes! me too! i love Jin so much here *shot* but... oh well, they both have to sit down and talk but that isn't going to happen anytime soon... *sigh*

thank you for taking time off your busy sched to comment here~ ♥ *huggles*

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