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tetila

Twenty Words that Began Forever: Tangled Up

Oct 12, 2013 12:43

Title: Tangled Up
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Just wishful thinking
Summary: “You can sit here, Torres. The trashcan table is for losers that only made it in on the second try.” Academy AU
Warnings: Tons of fluff and I took the freedom to create a world where being gay isn't that much of a problem.
A/N: It only ( Read more... )

fic: daniel agger/fernando torres, football: daniel agger, #fic, football: fernando torres

Comments 18

allwaswellharry October 17 2013, 00:38:48 UTC

B E A U T I F U L

I have no words to describe how much i loved this! It made my heart melt, i love it. I adore this paring and this is precious.

Fernando inhales, trembling, and stretches up that last inch, catching Dan’s lips, wet and clumsy. --> My favorite part of the smut. I could almost picture it ;)

tetila October 18 2013, 19:05:56 UTC

Did you change your username?

But anyway I'm glad you liked it and took time to comment :)

I loved writing the sex scene and I wanted it to be sleep y and comfortable and familiar <3

jumping_down October 21 2013, 20:01:45 UTC

This is so effing gorgeous and clever and I wish I wrote something like this. One of my favorites of this pairing, by far. Congrats, girl. <3

tetila October 23 2013, 18:40:39 UTC

Thank you <3

I might have said something like this about you and your story about Dan being a photographer to a friend last weekend ;)

caivallon October 26 2013, 13:43:39 UTC

So much praises for you... and all of them so well deserved!
What can I say more (that noboby mentioned before, that is)?
I envy your ability to write in english... for me it's absolutely admirable how you (and narya86 as well) manage to write in a foreign language and still being able to express so much emotions in your readers. That's a gift, darling!
And I envy your ability to say so much with few words. Your create feelings, scenes, the whole story with such few words. There's not a single gratuitous word and... that's a quality. It's kind of pure.
I especially liked number 6 (but that's because I still can't write intimate scenes like that ^.^)
I really really liked this story... and I'm still very very glad you finally finished it.
Many thanks for your kind dedication, It means a lot to me ♥

tetila October 27 2013, 14:01:56 UTC

Thanks dear :)

And I don't know what you mean, you're writing sex with me right now^^

thopix October 27 2013, 13:42:31 UTC

I've really missed your writing!!!. Amazing fic as always. I love the way the story is displayed.And how you were still able to transmit so much different emotions.

tetila October 27 2013, 14:00:38 UTC

Always good to see the old readers around! :)

I'm glad I was able to finish it and that you liked it! Thanks for the comment!

narya86 November 12 2013, 17:13:43 UTC

I remember the first time you told me about this. I'm really so incredibly happy that this story found its way to completion, because it was a great idea, and, as everyone on here already stated, it's incredibly beautifully executed. And I want to thank you again for sending it to me despite everything; it made me honestly very happy, not just what's written, but everything about the way it's presented.

My favourites are 14, 9, 6 and 2... a mix of angst and fluff, I think. But really, I had a smile on my face while reading every single one (except for 2, I was near tears there).

I guess I want to say thank you for writing this, but for you to know that, after everything we went through, it means more than just that. And it makes me hope that we'll somehow manage to get back to it, because right now my heart aches.

(Also, I agree with Mika. This should go in the Rec List.)