red dots~ [part2]
title:red dots [w/ onion smileys]
pairing:kihyukhae :D kihae, kihyuk, eunhae, implied SiHanChul, Yewook and other pairings
genre:angst?romance
rating:safe (; *cuz i dont want to write smut. im afraid*
summary:eunhyuk finally meet w/ his bestfriend after so many years but he never thought donghae will treat him as he never existed and as a stranger. but when eunhyuk meet this oh-so-hot-and-gorgeous Kim Kibum,w/c is Donghae's lover, things started to be so confusing... because eunhyuk cant deny to himself that he has a crush on Kibum.(what im saying is nonsense. i cant explain well)
a/n:tsk... im sorry.
T^T cuz of my addiction to KiHae, i decided to change the plot of this fanfic. T^T but of course with my friend's permission, the one who write the first part.actually, i already had the sequel for the first part before i came up with this. but, yeah, i made another one. but dont worry, i wont show my kihae bias here. hopefully. 8D im sorry ate faye for choosing kihae over eunhae. T^T
previous: part1
~
"oh~ before I forgot, stupid brat, could you please close your zipper? I hate to see a red-dotted brief."
Those words echoed in his ears all over again.
Eunhyuk always remembers what his bestfriend--- no, his ex-bestfriend, ---told him before he left with those 9 shining boys. He felt he's alone, even though there are many pairs of judging eyes around, staring at him like they were going to eat him. The students laughed at him, babbling behind and talking nonsense against him. He felt he would cry anytime but he managed to run anyway, thinking of his grandfather as his strength.
He ran not knowing where to go when he ended up in the fire exit of that prestigious-but-hell-like school.
Eunhyuk cried there silently, not noticing a pair of eyes staring at him. He fell on his knees, digging his nails into his legs, asking himself why did his bestfriend acted like that in front of him... in front of everyone. He can't remember Donghae as a little brat kid when they were little. He always see Donghae as a cheerful and dorky person.
"Fuck you Donghae!!", Eunhyuk suddenly exclaimed with sadness and anger. "I hate you!!",
he almost screamed between his sobs while punching the floor forcefully. "I hate you... Lee Donghae! I hate you!"
Eunhyuk cried again silently. Many thoughts started to run through his head.
He told himself that maybe Donghae had an amnesia, or even worse than that! Maybe he has an alzheimer's disease! Or maybe he got hit by a car? Or he got hit by a stone in his head that's why he forgot about me and our friendship! Or... or... or...
"Why do you hate Donghae so much that you almost damaged my eardrum with that loud voice?",
a voice suddenly came behind him.
Eunhyuk slowly turned his back to see who cut of his thoughts. "Who-who are you?", he asked the guy behind him with a puppy face,
, still crying.
"I don't give my name to strangers.", the guy told him annoyingly. But deep inside, he felt his heart skipped a bit because of what he's seeing. He can't deny that he thinks how cute this guy can be even if he's crying like a lost kid. Shit.
"Oh c'mon! You are the one who interrupted me here so I have the right to ask what's your name!"
Finally, he managed to cut off his thoughts.
"Really? Are you sure about that, monkey-looking piece of shit?", the other guy asked Eunhyuk then grinned, making him startled. He can't forget what Donghae called him earlier. "monkey-looking piece of shit".
"Hey you---"
"Don't worry. I won't tell Donghae that you cursed him... Lee Hyukjae.", the other guy smirked then turned his back. "And by the way, I am Kim Kibum.", he said while waving.
Eunhyuk was left with shock on his face. "Shit. Who the hell is that guy? Well, he's hot.", he grinned to himself. "I think its not bad to stay in this school after all."
He hurriedly wiped his tears away and went towards the door to go out.
~~~
"Just where the fuck is Kibum?!", Donghae asked Ryeowook with an obvious annoyed face. He's looking for his lover since this morning but no Kibum showed up.
"Relax hyung!", Ryeowook answered him. "Maybe he's in his usual spot."
"Yah Hae! Why do you always look for that boyfriend of yours? There are many girls, and even guys, who wants to be with you y'know! You don't have to run after that one and only anti-social kid in our group, which is my brother.", Heechul told him, sitting on Hankyung and Siwon's lap while wrapping his arms around the two in the couch.
"Shut up hyung. You don't care.", Donghae answered, slightly relaxed now.
"Just imagining a threesome is very disgusting.", Yesung said with no particular person he's talking to but Siwon,Heechul and Hankyung knew that Yesung talks about them.
"Fuck you Jongwoon! Do you wanna die?!", Heechul stood up from his position and faced Yesung angrily.
Yesung just shook his head and grabbed Ryeowook to create a shield from an angry Heechul. Ryeowook giggled and kissed Yesung's forehead. "I told you to be careful on what you are saying to Heechul hyung."
"Whatever!", Heechul rolled his eyes and walked back to sit on Siwon and Hankyung's lap again. Silence conquered their own private room afterwards, making Siwon raised an eyebrow. He looked at Heechul and Hankyung, confused. "Why?", the two asked Siwon in unison.
"Silence is not a word in this room right?", Siwon asked. The other two just nodded. "Then what's with the silence here? Where are the others?"
Siwon looked at where Heechul stood up before to face Yesung but he saw no signs of Yesung and Ryeowook there.
"Ah. Didn't you notice Hae, Wookie and Jongwoon walked out of the room?", Hankyung asked him.
"No? I was busy staring at my two fuckable lovers."
"Shut up. You're more fuckable.", Heechul smirked. "Anyways, you should stop being so religious. Its so obvious why they're not here.", Heechul stated, flipping his hair sexily.
"Why?"
"All of them are having sex somewhere else. Except Donghae, who's dying in finding his Kibum.", Hankyung said, grinning. Heechul also grinned, getting what Hankyung's meaning of that smirk. Then Heechul stood up, grabbing the other two's wrist. "Lets go. I'll take you two to SiHanChul wonderland."
~~~
Fuck! Kibum! Where are you?!
Donghae plans to scream but a pair of hands suddenly covered his eyes. "Guess who?", Donghae can't help but smile, his anger for that person faded away.
"Fuck you. Im not stupid for not knowing who owns this hands!", he said, trying to hide his smile while holding the other guy's hands.
"Kibummie... Where have you been?", Donghae asked with a pout as Kibum turned him around for them to face each other. "Im looking for you this morning. I... I miss you. Im dying to see you."
Kibum smiled to his boyfriend's sweetness. "Im sorry.", the younger guy leaned closer, making them touch each other's foreheads. "I was in the fire exit this whole morning. And I also miss you Hae.", he said while moving his head to kiss his boyfriend in his lips sweetly.
"If you miss me, then why didn't you look for me?", Donghae asked with sadness in his voice.
"I planned to meet with you this morning, but you were busy with your friends and with that... Lee Hyukjae."
Donghae pulled his head to face Kibum properly. "Kibummie, we already talked about Heechul hyung and the others.", he told his boyfriend. Kibum always complain about Donghae's group, where he's also a member even before Donghae transferred in their school. Kibum doesn't want to be a part of that group, because he thinks they're just bad influence, but his older brother, Heechul, forced him to join so he can't do anything to protest. There are 11 of them in their group, who's reigning over the school.
Donghae really wants to be a part of that group ever since because of the privilege given in their school. Kibum tried to stop him, but he can't. His boyfriend was given a chance to be a part of the group in one condition:forget your past life and live only for the group. From that day on, Kibum realized his boyfriend changed a lot. The cheerful and sweet Donghae he knew was gone. But still, Kibum want to thank him because Donghae didn't change his personality towards him, he's still loving and sweet to his lover.
"But, about Lee Hyukjae, how did you know him?", the older asked in confusion.
"Well, news spreads fast.", Kibum shrugged.
"I don't want you to get closer to him."
"Huh? Why?"
"Nothing. Its just... Aish! Nothing!"
"Oh and by the way, i met him a while ago. He seem to be nice. But it looks like he doesn't like you. What did you do to him, huh?". Kibum giggled, remembering Eunhyuk's puppy face in front of him.
Donghae's eyes narrowed. "Where did you meet him? Kibum, I tell you, don't get closer to him.", he said seriously.
Kibum became curious because Donghae only calls him "Kibum" when he's angry or something serious happened. He became more interested with that new kid. There's something going on here.
"Okay okay. Im sorry.", Kibum smiled, kissing Donghae sweetly.
"Huh, you really know how to make me smile.", Donghae grinned.
"I love you Hae."
"I love you too Kibummie!"
Donghae jumped into Kibum, placing his legs around his lover's hips and his arms around his neck. They kissed each other furiously, not noticing a startled and hurt Eunhyuk from a not-so-far corner.
"N-no.. Donghae... and the guy earlier??", Eunhyuk felt his chest tightened, he could hardly breathe. But he doesn't know if he's jealous over Kibum... Or is he jealous over Donghae... for kissing his new crush?
I... I don't know...
:TBC:
i really suck.
no!! my kihae bias!! 8D LOL! thanks for reading!
im sorry if i didn't put onion smileys anymore in the middle until the end. too lazy to find the proper smiley for a scene.
so... how was it?? please comment. D: LOL! *puppy eyes*
*cursing myself because i still have two fics to continue yet i made this first.*
and btw, they are only 11~ not including eunhyuk of course. so which do you think is the other one missing?? XDXDXD i also need help in giving a name for their group. 8D can anyone help me? LOL!
er er er~ :D:D:D
pairing:kihyukhae :D kihae, kihyuk, eunhae, implied SiHanChul, Yewook and other pairings
genre:angst?romance
rating:safe (; *cuz i dont want to write smut. im afraid*
summary:eunhyuk finally meet w/ his bestfriend after so many years but he never thought donghae will treat him as he never existed and as a stranger. but when eunhyuk meet this oh-so-hot-and-gorgeous Kim Kibum,w/c is Donghae's lover, things started to be so confusing... because eunhyuk cant deny to himself that he has a crush on Kibum.(what im saying is nonsense. i cant explain well)
a/n:tsk... im sorry.
T^T cuz of my addiction to KiHae, i decided to change the plot of this fanfic. T^T but of course with my friend's permission, the one who write the first part.actually, i already had the sequel for the first part before i came up with this. but, yeah, i made another one. but dont worry, i wont show my kihae bias here. hopefully. 8D im sorry ate faye for choosing kihae over eunhae. T^T
previous: part1
~
"oh~ before I forgot, stupid brat, could you please close your zipper? I hate to see a red-dotted brief."
Those words echoed in his ears all over again.
Eunhyuk always remembers what his bestfriend--- no, his ex-bestfriend, ---told him before he left with those 9 shining boys. He felt he's alone, even though there are many pairs of judging eyes around, staring at him like they were going to eat him. The students laughed at him, babbling behind and talking nonsense against him. He felt he would cry anytime but he managed to run anyway, thinking of his grandfather as his strength.
He ran not knowing where to go when he ended up in the fire exit of that prestigious-but-hell-like school.
Eunhyuk cried there silently, not noticing a pair of eyes staring at him. He fell on his knees, digging his nails into his legs, asking himself why did his bestfriend acted like that in front of him... in front of everyone. He can't remember Donghae as a little brat kid when they were little. He always see Donghae as a cheerful and dorky person.
"Fuck you Donghae!!", Eunhyuk suddenly exclaimed with sadness and anger. "I hate you!!",
he almost screamed between his sobs while punching the floor forcefully. "I hate you... Lee Donghae! I hate you!"
Eunhyuk cried again silently. Many thoughts started to run through his head.
He told himself that maybe Donghae had an amnesia, or even worse than that! Maybe he has an alzheimer's disease! Or maybe he got hit by a car? Or he got hit by a stone in his head that's why he forgot about me and our friendship! Or... or... or...
"Why do you hate Donghae so much that you almost damaged my eardrum with that loud voice?",
a voice suddenly came behind him.
Eunhyuk slowly turned his back to see who cut of his thoughts. "Who-who are you?", he asked the guy behind him with a puppy face,
, still crying.
"I don't give my name to strangers.", the guy told him annoyingly. But deep inside, he felt his heart skipped a bit because of what he's seeing. He can't deny that he thinks how cute this guy can be even if he's crying like a lost kid. Shit.
"Oh c'mon! You are the one who interrupted me here so I have the right to ask what's your name!"
Finally, he managed to cut off his thoughts.
"Really? Are you sure about that, monkey-looking piece of shit?", the other guy asked Eunhyuk then grinned, making him startled. He can't forget what Donghae called him earlier. "monkey-looking piece of shit".
"Hey you---"
"Don't worry. I won't tell Donghae that you cursed him... Lee Hyukjae.", the other guy smirked then turned his back. "And by the way, I am Kim Kibum.", he said while waving.
Eunhyuk was left with shock on his face. "Shit. Who the hell is that guy? Well, he's hot.", he grinned to himself. "I think its not bad to stay in this school after all."
He hurriedly wiped his tears away and went towards the door to go out.
~~~
"Just where the fuck is Kibum?!", Donghae asked Ryeowook with an obvious annoyed face. He's looking for his lover since this morning but no Kibum showed up.
"Relax hyung!", Ryeowook answered him. "Maybe he's in his usual spot."
"Yah Hae! Why do you always look for that boyfriend of yours? There are many girls, and even guys, who wants to be with you y'know! You don't have to run after that one and only anti-social kid in our group, which is my brother.", Heechul told him, sitting on Hankyung and Siwon's lap while wrapping his arms around the two in the couch.
"Shut up hyung. You don't care.", Donghae answered, slightly relaxed now.
"Just imagining a threesome is very disgusting.", Yesung said with no particular person he's talking to but Siwon,Heechul and Hankyung knew that Yesung talks about them.
"Fuck you Jongwoon! Do you wanna die?!", Heechul stood up from his position and faced Yesung angrily.
Yesung just shook his head and grabbed Ryeowook to create a shield from an angry Heechul. Ryeowook giggled and kissed Yesung's forehead. "I told you to be careful on what you are saying to Heechul hyung."
"Whatever!", Heechul rolled his eyes and walked back to sit on Siwon and Hankyung's lap again. Silence conquered their own private room afterwards, making Siwon raised an eyebrow. He looked at Heechul and Hankyung, confused. "Why?", the two asked Siwon in unison.
"Silence is not a word in this room right?", Siwon asked. The other two just nodded. "Then what's with the silence here? Where are the others?"
Siwon looked at where Heechul stood up before to face Yesung but he saw no signs of Yesung and Ryeowook there.
"Ah. Didn't you notice Hae, Wookie and Jongwoon walked out of the room?", Hankyung asked him.
"No? I was busy staring at my two fuckable lovers."
"Shut up. You're more fuckable.", Heechul smirked. "Anyways, you should stop being so religious. Its so obvious why they're not here.", Heechul stated, flipping his hair sexily.
"Why?"
"All of them are having sex somewhere else. Except Donghae, who's dying in finding his Kibum.", Hankyung said, grinning. Heechul also grinned, getting what Hankyung's meaning of that smirk. Then Heechul stood up, grabbing the other two's wrist. "Lets go. I'll take you two to SiHanChul wonderland."
~~~
Fuck! Kibum! Where are you?!
Donghae plans to scream but a pair of hands suddenly covered his eyes. "Guess who?", Donghae can't help but smile, his anger for that person faded away.
"Fuck you. Im not stupid for not knowing who owns this hands!", he said, trying to hide his smile while holding the other guy's hands.
"Kibummie... Where have you been?", Donghae asked with a pout as Kibum turned him around for them to face each other. "Im looking for you this morning. I... I miss you. Im dying to see you."
Kibum smiled to his boyfriend's sweetness. "Im sorry.", the younger guy leaned closer, making them touch each other's foreheads. "I was in the fire exit this whole morning. And I also miss you Hae.", he said while moving his head to kiss his boyfriend in his lips sweetly.
"If you miss me, then why didn't you look for me?", Donghae asked with sadness in his voice.
"I planned to meet with you this morning, but you were busy with your friends and with that... Lee Hyukjae."
Donghae pulled his head to face Kibum properly. "Kibummie, we already talked about Heechul hyung and the others.", he told his boyfriend. Kibum always complain about Donghae's group, where he's also a member even before Donghae transferred in their school. Kibum doesn't want to be a part of that group, because he thinks they're just bad influence, but his older brother, Heechul, forced him to join so he can't do anything to protest. There are 11 of them in their group, who's reigning over the school.
Donghae really wants to be a part of that group ever since because of the privilege given in their school. Kibum tried to stop him, but he can't. His boyfriend was given a chance to be a part of the group in one condition:forget your past life and live only for the group. From that day on, Kibum realized his boyfriend changed a lot. The cheerful and sweet Donghae he knew was gone. But still, Kibum want to thank him because Donghae didn't change his personality towards him, he's still loving and sweet to his lover.
"But, about Lee Hyukjae, how did you know him?", the older asked in confusion.
"Well, news spreads fast.", Kibum shrugged.
"I don't want you to get closer to him."
"Huh? Why?"
"Nothing. Its just... Aish! Nothing!"
"Oh and by the way, i met him a while ago. He seem to be nice. But it looks like he doesn't like you. What did you do to him, huh?". Kibum giggled, remembering Eunhyuk's puppy face in front of him.
Donghae's eyes narrowed. "Where did you meet him? Kibum, I tell you, don't get closer to him.", he said seriously.
Kibum became curious because Donghae only calls him "Kibum" when he's angry or something serious happened. He became more interested with that new kid. There's something going on here.
"Okay okay. Im sorry.", Kibum smiled, kissing Donghae sweetly.
"Huh, you really know how to make me smile.", Donghae grinned.
"I love you Hae."
"I love you too Kibummie!"
Donghae jumped into Kibum, placing his legs around his lover's hips and his arms around his neck. They kissed each other furiously, not noticing a startled and hurt Eunhyuk from a not-so-far corner.
"N-no.. Donghae... and the guy earlier??", Eunhyuk felt his chest tightened, he could hardly breathe. But he doesn't know if he's jealous over Kibum... Or is he jealous over Donghae... for kissing his new crush?
I... I don't know...
:TBC:
i really suck.
no!! my kihae bias!! 8D LOL! thanks for reading!
im sorry if i didn't put onion smileys anymore in the middle until the end. too lazy to find the proper smiley for a scene.
so... how was it?? please comment. D: LOL! *puppy eyes*
*cursing myself because i still have two fics to continue yet i made this first.*
and btw, they are only 11~ not including eunhyuk of course. so which do you think is the other one missing?? XDXDXD i also need help in giving a name for their group. 8D can anyone help me? LOL!
er er er~ :D:D:D