For some time, your characterization of the Medic has been bothering me. I've noticed you seem to focus a lot on some weird AU history between him and the BLU Medic. It feels like he's just an OC with the Medic's name tacked on due to the personality you've chosen to go with. Very little of his core canon personality is there and it seems like you've chosen to amp up one of his personality facets (his science-minded self) and forget everything else. Remember that he has a twisted sense of humour and he's not SERIOUS BUSINESS all of the time. I suggest you play TF2 as a Medic for awhile to get a feel for his character again, to hear his lines and everything.
Also, your activity is very poor. Maybe focus on that a little more, too.
Hurm, well! First off, thanks for the crit. I will admit that his whole thing with our BLU Medic has kind of...superseded much else with Medic here. I'm currently trying to think of how I can do other things wil him to try and toss him off in other directions as well--while that dynamic is fun to roll with, it really shouldn't be at the forefront, and I do need to fix that.
As for the characterization bit, I will definitely take your advice and pull some more of that sense of humor in. ...and yeah, I do need to find a computer that'll run it again.
But you got me there on the activity, aha. I'm not exactly sure what to do with Medic at the moment, but I'll be fixing that pretty soon!
...in addition, I finally fixed the anon thing. Sorry for the hassle!
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Also, your activity is very poor. Maybe focus on that a little more, too.
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As for the characterization bit, I will definitely take your advice and pull some more of that sense of humor in.
...and yeah, I do need to find a computer that'll run it again.
But you got me there on the activity, aha. I'm not exactly sure what to do with Medic at the moment, but I'll be fixing that pretty soon!
...in addition, I finally fixed the anon thing. Sorry for the hassle!
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