A ride to Love - 1/1 - (Onew x Kibum)

[tewki]

Title: A ride to Love
Paring: Onew/Kibum
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, humor, AU
Chapter: 1/1
Warnings: -
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine except from the plot.
Beta: kpoppets
Summary: A boy with chocolate brown hair and narrow dark eyes makes Jinki's bus ride to school a little less horrible.

Comments

[saravelda]

AM I THE FIRST TO COMMENT???

Alice, love...This is beautiful ^^

There was actually a time when I was obsessed with OnKey... They act like a mom and dad (especially in hello baby)

I loved the story!! you could totally feel Jinki's anxiety as he tried to talk to kibum. Beautiful!!!!

<3 <3 <3

[tewki]

............ /GLOMPS.

Thank you! ♥‿♥
I'm glad you liked it ~

I've never really been a OnKey fan XD Idk why... They do have their cute moments tho~

[melalocket]

I loveeeee this!!!!
Khekekekekekekeee~
soooooo cute :3
And onew sangtae is awsome!!!!

[tewki]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it~ ♥

[chocolatos]

oh good lord, dear Jinki who knows if it actually happens the other way around.
probably you've been stalking by key for the past half a year =))

welcome back >:D

[tewki]

Probably~ ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Thank you~! *w* ♥

[jinkibumiminho]

I enjoyed your characterizations. This was sweet.

[tewki]

Thank you~ I'm glad you liked it ♥

[omgsupernerdx3]

Jinki...why are you such an adorable creeper?

After fifteen minutes the bus is full; jammed wall to wall with stressful, unpleasant people, because all that matters on mornings is to make sure you're in time. People force their way in and out of the bus, mercilessly elbowing whoever happens to be in their way in the progress.

To say the least, the bus ride is not only boring but painful and nasty as well. It's sweaty and awkward, hot and stinky. A few times - a little too often, honestly - a person who would sweat a little more than normal, forget to brush their teeth or use unwashed clothes would take the seat next to Jinki, and Jinki would spend the rest of the ride trying to concentrate on holding his breath. But even without a smelly person beside him the ride is horrible.

Oh the torture that comes with riding the bus u_u. I understand how Jinki feels in this because I go through the same thing when I ride on the bus. It makes me what to stab my eye out with my pencil >_<"

[tewki]

THESE GIFS IDE ;A;