BEAUTY OF THE FORBIDDEN - 13/? - JONGHYUN X KIBUM

[tewki]

Title: Beauty of the Forbidden
Paring: Jonghyun/Kibum, Jonghyun/Jessica
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (PG-13)
Genre: AU, romance, angst, smut
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lies
Beta: bonbonyuri
Warnings: Pervy stuff?
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine except from the plot.
Summary: Jonghyun is bored, Kibum is curious and lust is sinful

Comments

[moshixd]

boooooooooooooooooooom
omg s'dkf;sldkfl;sdkf;lsdkf;lsdf
well, i'm kind of glad to see that jonghyun is not doing well
that bastard deserves it you know
and i'm also glad that he still think about kibum and that he really regreat what he did
but at the same time poor jonghyun )))))):
i want him to get together with kibum so bad ;; but not without a fight from jonghyun ofc
I mean, jonghyun have to fight to get kibum back!
i'm also happy about him not being the father! HAHAHA YES JESSICA YOU DID IT SO RIGHT I LOVE YOU (now please run away with your love and leave jonghyun alone! YAY)
Btw I'm dying to know what will happen
pls update it soon ;-; your story is really great! One of the best ever. I'm relieved you didnt give up. Thank you <3

[tewki]

Dont worry, Kibum wouldn't be so dumb to forgive Jjong just like that, hehehe~

I'll try to update the next chapter as soon as possible! Thank you so much for reading and commenting~

[life_not_knife]

ndfjnsdndjvnd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you updated!!!! I love you :) Love Love Love this story so much... and OMG poor Jonghyun, his life is utter crap and Jinki just looked at him like that too. I shed a tear at the scene where Jonghyun lights the candles and says sorry....poor baby... and poor Key too. Why can't I hate Jonghyun??? why??? lol. Ahhhhh.

And oh my god... dun dun dunnnnnnn.... 'and that's not you'

I kinda saw this coming when you hinted at the lack of her being in the house anymore and that a baby came along...then I thought, no... then BAM! you did haha.

Well, soooo many feelings lol. Thanks for the update, I loved it so much.

I shall wait patiently for the next part.

Xx L xX

[tewki]

I'm really happy you enjoyed this chapter! :3 Thank you for reading and commenting!

[kii_chu]

Ooooooh that baby isn't Jonghyun's!!! :O They know that they wont be happy with each other so I'm really happy that Jessica finally told Jonghyun the truth about her baby. Good that he hasn't told Kibum or Jinki that he's going to marry Jessica.
Will the next chapter be the continuation of this? because I want to know how is Jong's reaction and what he's gonna do about it...
thank you for updating :) and congrats for being a mom, lol.. what's she looks like? are you gonna post your baby's pic here? :D

[tewki]

Ohh, it would be the end of Jonghyun if Kibum (or Jinki) found out! O.O
As for the next chapter, I can't spoil it so you'll just have to wait and see~ *w*

And awh, thank you! x3 Well, he's a Samoyed... In other words, a fluffy lil polar bear. He looks like a stuff toy rather than an actual animal <.<

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[meshlurvkey]

My gawd only you have the ability to write something that would make my heart pound so loudly and my breaths to be so heavy while I'm reading each sentences.
I can seriously FEEL the emotions of each character and it's so bad to the point that I wanna cry cos I feel jonghyun :'(
IT'S SO DARN GOOD PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING! <3
And the ending was like a gun shot through my mind omg mindblown!!
Yes yes thanks so much for writing this hehe happy valentine's day babe! ♡♡♡

[tewki]

Awwwhh, thank you so much! ;n; I'm really happy you like my writing and left a cute comment! :3

[keygasmic]

Oh wow. Well. That was unexpected. Hm.

[tewki]

In a good way, I hope!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[keygasmic]

in a very good way! I can't wait for the next update~ hopefully this one comes sooner! (: