Confessions - Part 13

[txslash]

Title: Confessions
Written by: viggorlibean3 & okinay AKA Gayla & Gwen
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando
Disclaimer: No harm, no foul
Warning: No disrespect intended to the clergy
Note: Co-writing exercise fueled by prompt ‘hands and knees’

Note2: The previous chapters have been locked. You'll need to join texas_slash to read the entire series as we post it.

| Part 1 |

Comments

[ex_warmfuzzi813]

"they do not sin in their hearts" I really like that.

[txslash]

That's the beauty of this, isn't it? They're not sinning, only loving one another. *hugs*

[slashbycaranfin]

Damn, you ladies know you're catechism! The majority of Catholics i've known (MANY!) couldn't have articulated it as well as you did.

Looks like there's definitely going to be some tests for Vig and Orli. I hope they'll manage to hold onto one another through whatever storm comes at them.

[txslash]

Well as we stated, we couldn't have done any of this (regarding the church) without the help of two lovely and wonderful ladies, Ariel and Nancy.

Yes, Viggo & Orlando have some more tests to face, but as they do, hopefully they'll be stronger. :)

[weepingnaiad]

Glad to see them tackling this together and thought it was cute how Viggo was still reveling in Orlando, while poor Orli was understandably nervous and wanted to be so careful.

Glad Ian confirmed that they were not sinning in their hearts.

Lovely!
*hugs*
WN

[txslash]

Viggo is quite enamored with Orlando (and who wouldn't be?;) and Orlando wants to make sure they don't step on any toes along the way.

Father Ian is a good man, don't you think so?

[blueskydancers]

Great story - I look forward to each chapter. I'm so glad that both Viggo and Orlando are so sure of what they want - I just hope that they don't encounter too many problems getting Viggo out of the priesthood.

Just a little thing: "within the rights of marriage is strictly forbidden" should that be rites instead of rights? Not sure if it is a solely Brit spelling.

[txslash]

Good catch. That's a tricksey word, I've corrected it in the story. :)

We're glad you're enjoying each chapter. The boys know what they want, they just have to work through a few issues... stay tuned to see just what they are.

[laura_iskra]

I'm always glad to be reminded that there's a church able to be on the side of the people belonging to it and not just dictating them rules :p

beautiful part!

[txslash]

This church has a great leader in Father Ian, he is a generous soul... don't you just love him?!

Thanks for reading! :)