Confessions - Part 20

Sep 15, 2008 19:49

Title: Confessions
Written by: viggorlibean3 & okinay AKA Gayla & Gwen
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando
Disclaimer: No harm, no foul
Warning: No disrespect intended to the clergy
Note: Co-writing exercise fueled by prompt ‘hands and knees’

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laura_iskra September 16 2008, 05:46:47 UTC
I love that they're grown ups capable of addressing their fears and avoid them getting in the way of their life together!

and I love that they love each other so much :p

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txslash September 20 2008, 21:18:01 UTC
They're learning as they go, but they both feel that this is IT for them and want to do it right.

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mistry89 September 16 2008, 08:30:31 UTC
“Oh, Jesus fuck, I’m in for it, aren’t I?”

That sums up the whole chapter - Viggo is not only aware of some of the potential downsides to being with Orlando, but he didn't react to such casual blasphemy. Good things are happening :)
Thank you!

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txslash September 20 2008, 21:20:30 UTC
Viggo realizes with everything in life you have to take the good with the bad... pick your battles. He knows deep down Orlando has a good heart and he's willing to forgive little things. Especially knowing that Orlando would (and has) do anything for him.

Good things are definitely happening. :)

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lenalove September 16 2008, 09:16:00 UTC
txslash September 20 2008, 21:22:52 UTC
We wanted to show Viggo what Orlando's daily life would be like. He got a taste of jealousy and didn't like it... decided it wasn't for him. He'll occasionally have to face it again, but at least he knows that he and Orlando can talk through it when/if it happens again.

Eric is so much fun to write for in this story. He's just a big ol' lug and we love him! :))

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krazykitten46 September 16 2008, 10:41:37 UTC
Viggo's feelings are perfectly normal given the short time that they have been together. Orlando hasn't been in his life long enough to build that kind of trust. They're are still riding on emotions and young love. They did get over that bump with a minimum of lost skin.

bon

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txslash September 20 2008, 21:24:17 UTC
Yes, Viggo is having to deal with alot of things at once, but he's working his way through it. Some bumps are easier than others to get over. ;0)

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ireth06 September 16 2008, 13:37:08 UTC
Yep he really did create a monster! Now, go caveman Viggo! Let it rip! LOL!
Just do not think of skipping that afternoon and make referances to it ... I want it in detail you hear! *waves finger and tries not to laugh*

Great chapter sweeties! Viggo's got to deal with a lot of things that Orlando will not think of ... it's a good thing he talks about them !

Thanks for sharing hugs and kisses!

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txslash September 20 2008, 21:26:10 UTC
Just do not think of skipping that afternoon and make referances to it ... I want it in detail you hear!

We think you'll be very pleased with the next chapter... get the fans ready. ;oP

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ireth06 September 21 2008, 00:08:01 UTC
YAy! ...I think ... ;)

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