"Hard to breathe, feels like floating So full of love, my heart's exploding Mouth is dry, hands are shaking My heart is yours for the taking Acting weird, not myself Dancing around like the keebler elf Finally time for this poor shlub To know what it's like to fall in lub"
...fine, that poem's not mine.. you caught me. it's the greeting card from mr. deeds
however, this one, i did write - just an attempt to show you up.. the poem is horrible, so don't laugh at me.
twisted jeans and smeared lipstick seductive glances your dirty tricks morning quickies by the sunrise getting used to your constant lies i'd grow weak when you'd get flirty but in the end, you've only made me dirty you say i'm the only that you adore but you make me feel cheap a forgotten whore so i'll just lie here and pretend it's true that you love me and i love you for i remain loyal and continue to abide things look so pretty from the outside so kiss me again inside my thigh maybe this will be the last someday i'll say goodbye.
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i'm so glad that you're writing again.. i'll have to write something to show you up..
i really do love the poem.. [promise] and look forward to reading more :-P
laura
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So full of love, my heart's exploding
Mouth is dry, hands are shaking
My heart is yours for the taking
Acting weird, not myself
Dancing around like the keebler elf
Finally time for this poor shlub
To know what it's like to fall in lub"
...fine, that poem's not mine.. you caught me. it's the greeting card from mr. deeds
however, this one, i did write - just an attempt to show you up.. the poem is horrible, so don't laugh at me.
twisted jeans
and smeared lipstick
seductive glances
your dirty tricks
morning quickies
by the sunrise
getting used to
your constant lies
i'd grow weak
when you'd get flirty
but in the end,
you've only made me dirty
you say i'm the only
that you adore
but you make me feel cheap
a forgotten whore
so i'll just lie here
and pretend it's true
that you love me
and i love you
for i remain loyal
and continue to abide
things look so pretty
from the outside
so kiss me again
inside my thigh
maybe this will be the last
someday i'll say goodbye.
laura
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