Life Stories (Part 4)

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When Jin finally got to the hospital two days later, nobody was surprised. Junno merely nodded, Koki ignored him, and Nakamaru gave him a long tight hug.

"What took you so long?" Ueda said softly, opening the door to the ward. After that, everyone was quiet and left the ward to the two of them.

Jin stared at the still figure in the white bed. Kame.

Comments

[lavenie_2619]

Love it! :) it makes me sad when I'm reading. Poor Jin but now he's move on. Thanks for sharing and completed it. *get whacked*

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thanks babe. hahaha, maybe next time i should kill Jin off instead of Kame.

[lavenie_2619]

NOOOOOOOOOOO! *falling*

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hahaha! dskakldskaklskdsdjksasdjkasjk.

so you would rather i kill kame again? that's mean. ahahahah.

[kirei_shinigami]

i hate you...for making me cry.
T-T
nah, im just kidding!
i cant believe im actually crying, im trying my best not to let the tears gush out but hell, im crying. this is a good fic and a very nice one. when i was reading this, it was unpredictable. i was expecting a happy ending but instead it was a sad one. still, i like this. you are such a good writer and the plot is good. the story is beautiful.
thanks for writing this one. its definitely worth keeping and sharing.

--chuu!

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thank you sweetie!
i think i should start writing fluff instead of angst.
hee i'm glad you like it.
XDXD

[kiwi_nya]

Oh, damn it! I'm crying now T_T Such a beautifuly sad story!!! Thanks for writing that fanfic! I can't help but cry right now)))The letter that Kame wrote was amazing!!! Idea of the story is great too!
Thanks, again

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haha thank you sweetie :) sorry i made you cry. but akame angst is just wonderful to write. XD
*is smacked*

[murasakimegumi]

I love the fic. I love how you described their ''history'' in detail and then the next string of events that happened. The story seems so factual and accurate, and you characterized them pretty well. :)

Part 4 particularly left an impact on me, especially Kame's letter to Jin. DAMN YOU FOR MAKING ME furiously try hard not to cry. D:

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AHAHAH. XDXDXD i'm glad you liked it!

but akame angst is wonderful. i wished there were more fics out there that could make me cry.

[murasakimegumi]

Yeah, I like reading Akame angst too, especially heart-wrenching ones like this one. :)

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:D do you have good fics to recommend? hahaha.

give me a nudge when you come across good fics yeap?

[closet_souffle]

to summarize it all, you broke my heart T-T
but regardless, it was lovely..
the flow and the whole timeline thingy was good, KAME DIED! YOU KILLED HIM! T-T
*stoned*

but, great story :)

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heee. i knew i should have written fluff AHAHAHA. XDXDXD

thank you babe :DD glad you liked it.