Life Stories (Part 4)

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When Jin finally got to the hospital two days later, nobody was surprised. Junno merely nodded, Koki ignored him, and Nakamaru gave him a long tight hug.

"What took you so long?" Ueda said softly, opening the door to the ward. After that, everyone was quiet and left the ward to the two of them.

Jin stared at the still figure in the white bed. Kame.

Comments

[redjae]

Untruth was my introduction to your work but this is the first time I'm leaving a comment.

To say that your a good writer seems too inadequate so I'll go with BRILLIANT!

I hope you keep writing!;)

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thank you babe ♥ i love writing and i really hope i have time to keep writing too :D

[chloe17]

this is so angsty... let me cry first...*sobs* actually this fic was suggested to me by my very good friend Lia. She said this is a very good fic. Indeed it is. Sorry i just commented at the very end of the Fic because i read this in one-go only. But it's beautiful too bad Kame died but at least in the end of his life Jin is by his side.

♥

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Nope it's enough to know that you enjoyed it :D Thank you ; i'm really sorry for making you cry though!

XD

[kimi_kudo]

awww it is so beautiful! heart breaking but beautiful T_T *still crying*

thank you for writing about our lovable Akame *HugZ*

[kame_kiyumi]

T.T
i hate that the evil people have to remove the only thing that kept kame living! *kicks them*

thanks for this~ it is certainly good... esp the part when they tried to steal presents for each other in their younger selves.....

[kawaiikame]

Omg it was so sad D:
I never expected to end like that~
but very great fic *__* it was so touching~~

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thank you :D
glad you liked it!