What Gods?

Oct 31, 2009 14:49



Title: What Gods?
Type: One-shot
Genre: Angst
Pairings: OT5
Summary: Changmin dies - a fic of what happens before that happens. livesmiling  <3

& thank you blurmeese and readyforever  for beta-ing. <3 (sorry if my tenses were huge bitches!)

g: dbsk, one-shot, # angst, p: ot5

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omg i mean this in a good way blurmeese December 30 2009, 09:18:29 UTC
SCREAMING OMG WHAT IS THIS. I'M ONLY AT LIKE, THE 4th PARAGRAPH AND I'M ALREADY ASKJDNK-ING OKAY BRB READING MORE.

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Re: omg i mean this in a good way textparade December 31 2009, 06:36:17 UTC
JOOOOOO I ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ YOU

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blurmeese December 30 2009, 09:45:02 UTC
okay so I'm typing this as I read, death god!fic omg D: this fandom needs more plots like this, you've got a really great premise on your hands here ngl

“Long, I can assure you" A pause. "Happy, I cannot.”
;; hi, no has died yet and my heart is already breaking.

and let him cry.
lets him cry?

Changmin tries to be normal for the following seven days but it was so goddamn hard, he just couldn’t. He insisted on cancelling everything they have, does things normal-Changmin would never do and doesn’t piss anyone off.
a bit of tense changing here but what I really want to comment on is how later, you mention that (But then again, not really) part and it's just so Changmin Monday for Yoochun. Tuesday for Junsu. Wednesday for Jaejoong. Thursday for Yunho. Friday for his family. Saturday for DBSK. Sunday to die.
...I. So matter-of-fact. Still planning. D:

Changmin can see the vapour come out as he spoke
tense change? but bb it's understandable, you've been flitting back and forth between the past and present a lot rofl

"I only drink in ( ... )

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textparade December 31 2009, 06:35:37 UTC
omg jo i ♥ you. thankq so much bb for reading through it and beta-ing, i've edited a tiny portion of it, but i can't really see my tense changing bleagh.

and i actually wanted to write an epilogue or something, changmin in heaven and watching them , Angel!Changmin-Earthlings!DBSK verse but i decided that i had no time boohoohoo.

and no you're not being anal! jo, why are you so nice omg hahahah. didnt you just beta it (kinda)? roflmao i guess i'll get another before posting it up :)

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readyforever January 1 2010, 07:30:02 UTC
so like.. the fic is not here :O

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jinsane226 January 1 2010, 07:31:59 UTC
Same here... no fic at all

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thechosenone47 January 1 2010, 07:32:00 UTC
erm, i think there's something wrong with your html? i don't see any fic :/

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