okay so I'm typing this as I read, death god!fic omg D: this fandom needs more plots like this, you've got a really great premise on your hands here ngl
“Long, I can assure you" A pause. "Happy, I cannot.” ;; hi, no has died yet and my heart is already breaking.
and let him cry. lets him cry?
Changmin tries to be normal for the following seven days but it was so goddamn hard, he just couldn’t. He insisted on cancelling everything they have, does things normal-Changmin would never do and doesn’t piss anyone off. a bit of tense changing here but what I really want to comment on is how later, you mention that (But then again, not really) part and it's just so Changmin Monday for Yoochun. Tuesday for Junsu. Wednesday for Jaejoong. Thursday for Yunho. Friday for his family. Saturday for DBSK. Sunday to die. ...I. So matter-of-fact. Still planning. D:
Changmin can see the vapour come out as he spoke tense change? but bb it's understandable, you've been flitting back and forth between the past and present a lot rofl
omg jo i ♥ you. thankq so much bb for reading through it and beta-ing, i've edited a tiny portion of it, but i can't really see my tense changing bleagh.
and i actually wanted to write an epilogue or something, changmin in heaven and watching them , Angel!Changmin-Earthlings!DBSK verse but i decided that i had no time boohoohoo.
and no you're not being anal! jo, why are you so nice omg hahahah. didnt you just beta it (kinda)? roflmao i guess i'll get another before posting it up :)
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“Long, I can assure you" A pause. "Happy, I cannot.”
;; hi, no has died yet and my heart is already breaking.
and let him cry.
lets him cry?
Changmin tries to be normal for the following seven days but it was so goddamn hard, he just couldn’t. He insisted on cancelling everything they have, does things normal-Changmin would never do and doesn’t piss anyone off.
a bit of tense changing here but what I really want to comment on is how later, you mention that (But then again, not really) part and it's just so Changmin Monday for Yoochun. Tuesday for Junsu. Wednesday for Jaejoong. Thursday for Yunho. Friday for his family. Saturday for DBSK. Sunday to die.
...I. So matter-of-fact. Still planning. D:
Changmin can see the vapour come out as he spoke
tense change? but bb it's understandable, you've been flitting back and forth between the past and present a lot rofl
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and i actually wanted to write an epilogue or something, changmin in heaven and watching them , Angel!Changmin-Earthlings!DBSK verse but i decided that i had no time boohoohoo.
and no you're not being anal! jo, why are you so nice omg hahahah. didnt you just beta it (kinda)? roflmao i guess i'll get another before posting it up :)
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