Our Years Before (.part ii)

Jun 22, 2011 13:48


Title: Our Years Before
Author: livesmiling  / textparade 
Summary: Everyone wants to be somebody, but what happens if all that glimmer was only in the chase? 
Pairings: Yunho/Jaejoong, OT5
Notes: help_japan  fic for boxxme . Sorry this took so long to write, I know you requested for a happy fic but i couldn't find it in myself to write something entirely uplifting :/ hope you like this ( Read more... )

g: dbsk, one-shot, p: yunjae, # angst, p: homin

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dulanis February 20 2012, 17:58:57 UTC
So heartbreaking. I would love to see something romantic that you wrote. So pretty please???

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livesmiling February 21 2012, 07:05:53 UTC
wow babe, i havent even POSTED this to any community, hahaha. but will do so now since i guess your comment is somewhat positive! hahaha.

i'll try if i have the time bb :)

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dulanis February 21 2012, 13:19:04 UTC
Please do. your writing is really good :)

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livesmiling February 22 2012, 11:22:30 UTC
yeah hes going to head for assisted suicide. :/ i meant for him to find release through death

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curiousocurious February 21 2012, 10:50:06 UTC
I thought that Yunho would commit suicide but I'm not sure since you wrote something about airport and the dokter. He's just traveling some other place since Korea holds to many memories, right?

I don't know anymore

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livesmiling February 22 2012, 11:23:17 UTC
hey babe nope he is going to commit suicide :/

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snow_meow February 21 2012, 19:55:38 UTC
It feels so sad.

It's like Yunho realises he needs help to move on.
His only way is to leave Korea and everything and person behind.

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gennaration February 22 2012, 00:02:19 UTC
I thought he was going to commit suicide *hyperventilates* But he's just going to get help, phew xD;

This is done really well~! I like how some dialogues didn't have quotation marks, it was a little confusing at first but I thought it was unique and ~creative~ :D And the way the scenes were cut felt like a movie *^* It's really cool.

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livesmiling February 22 2012, 11:23:44 UTC
ehhh hahaha he is going to commit suicide...

thanks bb

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