Session Three, Round One Results

Apr 12, 2007 23:59

Time for this session's first result post.
We will be saying goodbye to two participants this week.

Who made it through? )

wonderland__, round 1, session 3, results

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inquisitorial April 13 2007, 00:27:19 UTC
Critique for #4 please?

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helgarr April 13 2007, 00:32:49 UTC
Good Comments:

I like the simplicity and the open white space is somewhat inviting.

Critique:The desaturization was a very poor job--it's rough around the details on Kyouya's shirt and then the light texture really didn't help enhancing the image any. It looks rather unfinished; a brush in the upper right corner (which seems very empty with the WHITE) and better coloring job would have made the icon better ( ... )

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dragon_gypsy April 13 2007, 00:27:49 UTC
urgl D:

comments please nn #8

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helgarr April 13 2007, 00:34:21 UTC
Critique:

Don't kill me for saying this, but it's too boring. There's no text, nothing that grabs my eye. Also it's poorly colored and the texture layer only is on like, screen over top of the manga scan. It's too boring.

The crop is boring and the icon is too red/orange. It makes it look like the character's hair and clothes blend into the background.

Great cropping, but the design needs to be improved on.

The texture is overpowering the image and does nothing for it. The colouring serves no apparent purpose.

Too red. Needs to be more mixed. Some pixels kind of stand out, making the icon seem less clean.

Too much red and orange, very harsh on the eyes.

Orihime seems to be overpowered by the texture used in the icon

It looks rushed with just a color/overlay. Nothing stands out from it.

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helgarr April 13 2007, 14:42:25 UTC
Good Comments:

I like the design of it! It's a nice colour scheme and the A is well placed too ^^

Excellent composition.

It's got a different feel to it; it's not your average icon. I adore the colouring and how the image is duplicated but mirrored.

It's a very original crop and was executed nicely!

I'm not too sure why I really like this icon, but I find my eyes always being drawn back to it. It's very simple, but I love the coloring and the arrangement of it all.

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illeistic April 13 2007, 01:08:49 UTC
Comments for #2, s'il vous plait~

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helgarr April 13 2007, 14:43:43 UTC
Good Comments:

A nice simple cropping, but it allows for a good amount of space on the side. It feels a little awkward with it cutting off to white against her cheek, but other than that I really like it.

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thrift April 13 2007, 03:09:56 UTC
comments pour #13, plz~?

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helgarr April 13 2007, 14:44:55 UTC
Critique:

Very faint, cant really read text cleary etc

It is just way to dull. The colors should be much more vivid, but instead they are muted and boring. You can hardly see what the icons are about, actually. and the text, when you can read it, seems like it could be placed much better.

Good Comments:

Reason: I like the cropping, and the washed out effect looks good. Good use of textures, nice text, great job!

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