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All of Sudden [drabble]

Jun 12, 2009 08:47

Title: All of Sudden [drabble]
Rating: G
Pairing: TezFu of course
Genre: FLUFF!
Warnings: Fuji's a little sly, Unbetaed.
A/N: I don't want to disturb my beta so it ended up unbetaed and I'm busy with my studies so I could only give you a drabble. I dedicate this tochibikaoruchan for always beta-ing my fics!

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Fuji had used to think, "What is Tezuka to my life ( Read more... )

tezfu love, zukafuji

Comments 7

tacuma811 June 12 2009, 12:10:22 UTC

So short! I want to know what will happen next! XD It's cute

silverhood June 12 2009, 12:47:41 UTC

I want to see how it continues too! :D

paranoid_fridge June 13 2009, 19:05:13 UTC

Cute and short and sweet ^___^
Makes me wonder what happened after they got home ^_~

Thank you for sharing!

chibikaoruchan June 21 2009, 01:50:52 UTC

OMG OMG I FIC FOR ME!! *dances happily around* Sorry for the late reply though, I was focusing on my exam week... I didn't even get to so much as open my cpu for the week... *Sigh*

Again, you've improved. I must say your verbs have improved very much! ^___^ Now, all you need to worry about is the formulating. (I've noticed you tried using shorter sentences, I'm pleased to see you are fairing so well! *sigh* You learn so fast.... I can't believe it!) XD

With time you will get used to formulating sentences, but right now I can still notice a small mistake. ^____^ You just need to get used to english is all.

'a handsome but stoic person beside him asked, making him back to reality.' It's that you don't 'make' someone back to reality, you either 'pull' him back, or 'bring' him back. ^____^ But that's about all. The rest of the sentences make sense.

Please continue writing! You are becoming more and more talented! Can't wait to beta your next fic, now that I'm free almost all summer <3 ( ... )

tezuka_andria June 21 2009, 12:36:31 UTC

Thank you! So you have time to beta my fics this time?

I'm going to write the continuation soon, and I'm going to send it to you later for beta. I hope I can improve!

I don't mind long comments. Actually, I like it because I have lots to read and to reply.

chibikaoruchan June 26 2009, 22:53:47 UTC

Glad to hear it! ^___^ I'll start working on the beta in a bit!

BTW: I love you header and your bg! (The way Rakuen colors never fails to amaze me. Even though the drawings are sometimes skinny ^^;;)

tezuka_andria June 27 2009, 00:25:51 UTC

yah, thanks for the compliment!

I don't care if those two were skinny, I just LOVE them! ^_______^