Sticky Response Pt 3

[mmouse15]

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FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

http://tfanonkink.livejournal.com/3587.html?thread=4237315#t4237315

This is maybe a bit odd, but... I want something about Starscream being forced to lick Megatron's hand. Maybe as a punishment, or following a punishment. Starscream has to be humiliated by it - it would be better if he's not turned on, if he is, he's disgusted at himself. Megatron is very turned on

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

No pacing, no stomping or kicking the wall. Not even tapping his foot

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

Starscream was already facing the hall and posed haughtily by the time Megatron and Motormaster reached him, undoubtedly able to hear the two hulking mechs from far down the hall. Stealth was not a strong suit or requirement of either of their frames. Jaw squared, one leg crossed nonchalantly over the other, Starscream half shuttered his optics and looked down his nose, though a shift in light implied he had at least glanced at Motormaster. Probably surprised to see him substituting for Soundwave, being so much more inexperienced in handling someone so tempestuous and dangerous then the carrier mech. They stopped in front of the cell, and Megatron had to fight back a chuckle when he heard the semi stifling his engine.

Excited already. So very young. Megatron allowed himself a small smile, remembering the enthusiastic thanks he'd received on the way down to the brig. Thanks that continued even after his warning that Motormaster may not even get his prize, depending on Starscream's actions. It hadn't mattered- the very idea that he

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

Oh my, the level of mindfuck here, threatening Starscream with something he doesn't fully understand but is pretty sure he Does Not Want but doesn't know HOW MUCH. a;ldkfjasd

Great start! :D

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

Thank you! And yes, the psychological "what is he going to do" is often so much worse for the unknown factor.

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

ASDFGHJKL!!!!

/faints from awesomeness/

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

I feel a little guilty about how badly I want this to happen to Starscream.
And oooh, Motormaster/Starscream, both intriguing and disturbing

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

Eeeeh, it's a kink-meme, don't feel too guilty. Though I'll take it as a compliment that my writing brought about empathy all the same

And Motormaster Starscream indeed. Megatron's little favourite versus his valued and hated second.

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

This is awesome! I cannot wait for more.

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

Ok give me a seond to reconstruct the pile of goo that is me after I melted from the hotness of this. I am just going to add my voice to the chorus here by saying that Megatron is so wonderfully devious in this and I must have more!

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

I'm happy people are so enthused about his characterisation. I was nervous about writing him, so it's nice to know it worked.

More is had now, after a long ass wait.

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

Guh! The awesome that is this fic has left me without the ability for form proper words!

I'd LOVE to see more of this!

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

Sorry for the wait, and here it is!

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[peacewish]

You have a new thing up, and I didn't know! How did I miss this in the newsletter? Oooh, hate being last to the party. This is already lip-lickingly hot, and nobody's even come within breathing distance of the other yet. The defiance that is Starscream, the pure force that is Megatron, the way they collide is simply incomparable. Nobody else can duplicate it. I don't think they'd want to. By rights, Megatron and Starscream ought to have killed each other centuries ago, but somehow they remain in uneasy coexistence, unstoppable force hovering just short of the immovable object. Ready and eager for more, please.

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

I had a new thing up, and then I didn't even reply to comments for months! Shame on me, shame! At this point, I'd say being last to the party was moot with how long I took. :P

This is already lip-lickingly hot, and nobody's even come within breathing distance of the other yet

High praise from you- I wanted to do as much with the characters for tension as I could. The rest of the story is pretty simple, so they needed to be able to carry it. Especailly between Megatron and Starscream- their relationship is so destructive and bizarre on so many levels. I'm glad you feel they did, you're a bit of a master of character interaction/relation.

Re: FIC: G1 - Learning Experience - Megatron/Starscream, Motormaster - Licking (non con) - Pt 1

[swindleslog]

I actually got this finished a while ago, and am digging through my old lost messages lately. Finished up one is over here: http://swindleslog.livejournal.com/16430.html