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Sticky Response Pt 3

Oct 04, 2011 12:41

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FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 1 anonymous August 21 2012, 05:50:38 UTC

For this prompt: http://tfanonkink.livejournal.com/10462.html?thread=10303454#t10303454. It was posted prior to our getting a named Insecticon in Prime, but I ended up using an OC pairing because as much as I love David Kaye, I didn't really want to write about Hardshell. Also, just a heads up, a few other kinks may have crept in, at least in the sense that the sex is perhaps a bit non...mammalian. Anyhow, enjoy ( ... )

Re: FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 10 okami_myrrhibis August 22 2012, 20:54:02 UTC

And here I was looking forward to enjoying playing FoC tonight!!! lol

Re: FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 10 jenkristo August 22 2012, 08:51:37 UTC

Gosh, this was fantastic. The technicalities were fascinating and sexy and the courtship was sweet. Really nice!

Re: FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 10 anonymous August 22 2012, 09:14:03 UTC

*Sqees and hugs the fic*
Can I keep it? Please ohpleaseohplease? I will love it and hug it and call it George! XD

The smex was hot, but what really made the fic for me was the (relatively) long build-up, when the courtee felt a healthy dose of apprehension as to what the courter's intentions actually were. Love it!

Re: FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 10 anonymous August 24 2012, 21:55:46 UTC

Alien bug monsters should not be so romantic. Oh my god, I loved it.

Re: FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 10 anonymous September 16 2012, 02:46:16 UTC

These two are cute. Sometimes, a good OC fic is just what the medibot ordered.

Re: FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 10 swindleslog October 10 2012, 03:41:10 UTC

Neat! I really liked how you kept the physicality and actually used the unusual anatomy of the insecticons in this. You made all those neat little parts of them functional and used. Part of the body, so why wouldn't they use all of them naturally? It would have been very easy to gloss over all of it and just treat them like extra limbs, ignore the mandibles, and just have a quick fuck-fic, but you wrote them as insecticons, with all the perks and limitations that would imply.

And I really like how tender and gentle he was, considering the size disparity. He wanted Dragline, and he treated him like he was wanted and cared for. It was sweet, and a very nice read because of it. :) (The culture shock bits were interesting too. The situation was rather public by nature, but Sheathwing and his brethren don't seem to think much of it).

Re: FIC: By Nature Winged – TFP – Insecticon/Vehicon – Courtship/Claiming, Doggy Style Part 10 anonymous October 17 2012, 00:17:50 UTC

Now I'm stuck in that really awkward position of longing for more and knowing I'm not going to find it. Curse you.

So good! I really liked how you built it up, the culture clashes and overlaps, and how strangely sweet it was in a very alien sort of way (but that wasn't really all that alien at all!)

You are a wonderful writer.

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