[FIC] Aimai Na Kankei (It's natural for us to be together) 2013 Rewrite

[tftcproductions]

Title: Aimai Na Kankei (It's natural for us to be together) 2013 Rewrite

Comments

[lola_xoxo92]

I love this version! It's much more rich and filled out!

[guitar_girl_z]

I love how you took the time to fill in their thoughts and surroundings. Are you planning to write the sequel as well (in the manga, the scene where his brother finds out he's living with an older man)? Please do! :)

[tftcproductions]

I read the sequel last night as I was finishing this up. I would like to write it because it was very interesting to see how they acted when the family came back into play. But I didn't really like the ending. One of my biggest pet peeves in manga is when the uke, no matter his age or experience, isn't taken seriously by the seme. I think I might change it a lot if I wrote it and make it longer, haha. I'd also like to see more of Yunho's character and fill what he wants from the relationship out a little more than it is done in the manga.
Thanks so much for bringing this up! And thank you for leaving a comment :)

[guitar_girl_z]

OMG please write it...I'll be waiting! :)

[mcarol85]

Read the original, read the manga and then read this revised version. It's good! Thanks for writing