Comments | th_fanfic: FIC: Fragments, PG-13, Bill/Tom, 1/1

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FIC: Fragments, PG-13, Bill/Tom, 1/1

Sep 01, 2012 12:39

Title: Fragments
Author: ????
Pairing(s): Tom/Bill
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Drug use, incest
Disclaimer: All settings, events and dialogue are fictional. I do not know Bill & Tom Kaulitz and I have no clue of what really happened during the time the pictures here were taken. No money or other benefits are made from this work. The copyrights of ( Read more... )

rating: pg13/12, fest: fqf_2012, category: slash, bill/tom

Comments 15

zeph317toho September 1 2012, 21:47:38 UTC

This story is written so beautifully! It seems like you chose every word with such care to draw the perfect picture and make such a powerful statement. You put so much emotion and love into this that the story simply reflects it all. You did a gorgeous job making this so real and plausible; some lines gave me goosebumps and others made me grin so big. Wonderful story! ♥

thesaltywench September 2 2012, 01:53:59 UTC

I loved every word of this. It's gentleness made every encounter so much more meaningful. I know I'll remember your version of what happened every time I look at any of those pictures. Thank you.

strssna September 2 2012, 14:09:53 UTC

This was absolutely lovely.. So tender and gentle, but also very sad in a way that they have to hide the most important thing from the world. But they still wouldn't change that. You captured that wonderfully.

zuzana899 September 2 2012, 20:38:04 UTC

Beautiful.

Everything is there, every emotion. I can't describe my feelings right now properly.... You made me smile... sadly mostly, and you were touching my heart with every little story, writing about forbidden emotions that must be hidden. Suddenly Tom and Bill were real, all of this was real and possible. I was literally dying to read the last words of the stories, it clenched my heart because it was so bittersweet but so beautiful. Don't know what else to say. I love it. Thank you. PS: WHO ARE YOUUUU?

cristy22 September 3 2012, 12:56:47 UTC

You could sometimes feel such sadness for having to hide their love, but at the same time a happiness for what they did have. I felt like I was viewing a piece of their private life and had to keep reminding myself as I went back to look at the pictures again that this was just a story. A beautiful story.