Comments | th_fanfic: FIC: Once Upon a Gustav, PG-13, Bill/Tom, Gustav/Georg, 1/2

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FIC: Once Upon a Gustav, PG-13, Bill/Tom, Gustav/Georg, 1/2

Sep 08, 2012 08:59

Title: Once Upon a Gustav
Author: ???
Pairing(s): Bill/Tom, Gustav/Georg
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Fairy tale violence, one sort-of death (he gets better…), crack
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything associated with this story, and I’m making no profit from it.
Summary: Gustav doesn’t believe in any of that magic fairy tale nonsense.
FQF Prompt: ( Read more... )

rating: pg13/12, pairing: bill/tom, pairing: georg/gustav, fest: fqf_2012, category: slash

Comments 9

fyredancer September 9 2012, 00:18:28 UTC

You already know I think this is absolutely brilliant! Gustav is so perfect in this story, so grumpy and pragmatic, but still pressing onward with his hopeful search. <3 I love it! And Tom and Bill are adorable. <3 <3 <3

zeph317toho September 12 2012, 23:23:10 UTC

Oh stop! But thank you again very, very much for reading this for me! <3

I have to admit, I'm kind of in love with this Gustav. He's like a Grumpy dwarf mixed with a dash of Prince Charming and a side of the Prince from Cinderella whose name I can never remember. I'm so happy you enjoyed this -- thank you!

zuzana899 September 9 2012, 21:22:52 UTC

Unbelievable. It was only beginning and I was sure I will love it and I loved it indeed. I don't know who you are but this twisted fairytale was exactly what I dreamt about :D awwwww aww Snow Bill and tangled Tom and poor lonely Gustav... but not for long. Hurray to next chapter! XD

zeph317toho September 12 2012, 23:23:50 UTC

Aw, your review made me smile so big the other day! :D Thank YOU! I'm really happy you loved this! <3

tinie September 10 2012, 11:37:58 UTC

OMG sooooo gooooood. Poor, poor Gustav in the beginning there, the horrible family and his mother gone D:
I laughed straight out at the sight in the coffin - still breathing - and the yells from the little person saying "I'm not a doctor, I'm a miner!" And the chaos when no one thinks about opening the coffin. The little men are so funny oh my god, one fainting with pure excitement.

Glorious Snow Bill is so glorious indeed! I love the idea of him trying to carry the weight of the jewels/gems he stole, naughty bastard. And vain of course - hair products and can't help being so beautiful, huh! And so bitchy! HAHAHHA. omg when Gustav had to hold Bill back from the candy house. Just SO FUNNY and lovely and oh dear. Gustav shook him, just to stop his hysteria, then shook him again just because it felt good. Sorry, I am LOLing here! HAHAHHHAAH.The children in the house! I was scared there for a moment ( ... )

zeph317toho September 12 2012, 23:33:30 UTC

Thank you sooooo much! *hugs* I'm really happy it made you laugh! That was my goal ( ... )

tinie September 13 2012, 06:48:12 UTC

I found it so funny, and Gustav was a great main character. I honestly don't think Bill stole the show! I found Gustav stayed the center all the while, because even when Bill did his most dramatic moves and was "over the top", Gustav was there counter-balancing it with a thought or an action. It was perfect, so I found it ( ... )

zeph317toho September 14 2012, 19:51:15 UTC

Ah, I'm really glad you found it funny. Sometimes my sense of humor can be a little suspect, so I'm never sure if other people are just doing the polite laugh or actually laughing along with it. Thank you!

I've been enjoying writing Gustav since I started writing TH fic. He seems so stoic and not flashy like the twins, but I think he has some sort of wild streak hidden under all that. I'm so happy you liked the balance between him and the twins here! *hugs*

The fangirl dwarves just kind of happened. I always thought the dynamic in Disney's Snow White was kind of weird between Snow White and seven little men, so I just kind of let them run with it. And, you know, who wouldn't want to keep Bill locked in their cottage all alone. *cough* I actually was trying to figure out seven TH-affiliated men to imagine them as, but I came up short, so I just named David. And then that thought set me off howling in laughter. xD ( ... )

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