FIC: The (Not So) Sweetest Thing, Georg/Gustav, G, 1/1

Apr 02, 2013 10:02

Title: The (Not So) Sweetest Thing
Author: ???
Pairing(s) : Georg and Gustav
Rating: G
Warnings: None - you know they curse, right? Right?
Disclaimer: The G’s are not mine … or so the Magdeburg police report specifically stated on page two. In bold print. I got it, okay?
Summary: When Georg is ordered to quit smoking by his doctor, he tries ( Read more... )

fest: fqf_geo_2013, rating: g, pairing: georg/gustav, category: slash

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kiakaha April 2 2013, 14:44:56 UTC
Adore!

So gorgeous. I love the way they are written and I love Gustavs tricks to get Georg to stop XD

Super Cute ending!

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zukosphoenix April 10 2013, 20:08:32 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy that you liked it - Gustav is creative when he wants to be. :) Thanks for reading!

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zeph317toho April 2 2013, 17:55:35 UTC
I started giggling somewhere around Jan. 5, laughed out loud about the seagulls but lost it completely and totally at the nicotine patches! When you topped it off with the Incident in Munich, I laughed until I cried. I’ll never see a lawn sprinkler without thinking of Bill again-you’ve ruined summer lawn care forever! Then the tomatoes and all the horribly icky combinations of things Gustav came up with to make Georg taste. Some of them made me gag; I can only imagine what they did to Georg! But leave it to Gustav to come up with the winning (however nasty) idea. This was one of the funniest things I’ve ever read, and the perfect combination of zany comedy and really sweet friendship. I love how you even made the twins real characters without them having to show up. But, the absolute best part was the beautiful friendship between Georg and Gustav, and how you showed clearly how much they care for each other. You described Georg's growing feelings and realization in such a lovely way. It was fantastic. Thank you so much for writing ( ... )

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zukosphoenix April 9 2013, 19:46:32 UTC
I'd like to say sorry for ruining sprinklers for you, but I really can't. I cracked myself up with that, I have to admit ... and can you imagine kissing Gustav with all that stuff on his tongue? I mean, its Gustav, but ....

I'm so glad you liked it, babe, and thank you for commenting!

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hexenhasel April 2 2013, 20:58:30 UTC
I love it. It made me smile, which I needed. Thank you for writing this; it was very well done.

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zukosphoenix April 10 2013, 20:06:47 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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kseenaa April 3 2013, 20:19:03 UTC
X-D Oh that was just DELICIOUS! I think I know who wrote this, telltale wordiness and all! AWESOME! BLOODY AWESOME! And so much fun! *still laughing at it all*

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zukosphoenix April 10 2013, 20:07:49 UTC
I'm glad that you enjoyed reading, thanks!

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kseenaa April 10 2013, 22:20:50 UTC
SURE DID! But I was DEAD WRONG when I guessed who wrote this! SORRY! X-D I just got you mixed up. But at least you got one thing in common there. AWESOME dialoge! But then again, that is your strength. :-) LOVED IT! And just re-read it...

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thilia April 3 2013, 20:30:06 UTC
I adored this and giggled my way through it; I could totally imagine every scene and every conversation between the two of them and both Georg and Gustav were absolutely delightfully written :D And honestly, who wouldn't want to kiss Gustav despite the garlic (etc) taste? ;)

BEST.

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zukosphoenix April 10 2013, 20:09:17 UTC
I would still want to kiss him, but I might need a mint afterward. You know Gusti, he's never afraid to "go there." Thanks for reading!!!

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