Lost Dog, G, Bill/Gustav, 1/1

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Title: Lost Dog
Author: ???
Pairing(s): Bill/Gustav
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I don't own or make money off of Tokio Hotel
Summary: Bill finds a lost dog, and she's charming -- within fifteen minutes, Bill is enamored with her. When her owner, Gustav, comes around looking for her, both he and Bill learn that it's a lucky find in more

Comments

[zeph317toho]

OMG, I loved this story so much! It was adorable! The dog's perspective was just precious (and seemed very true to life)! Poor Bill, I really felt for him when he had to give back such a wonderful dog, but it seems like he got something even better. ;D There were so many lines I loved, but I think my favorites came from the dog because I think she sees things most clearly. Thank you for writing such a fun story that left me grinning forever. I want to give you a treat! <3

[melluransa]

YAY! I love you so much, and you are adorable! I don't know what it is (Her Majesty's growls) but I felt compelled (Her Majesty's teeth) to write a story about dogs (Her Majesty's noble kin). It's a win-win situation for Bill, huh. :) I ADORED writing as the dog. It was awkward at first but it grew on me, and I just let myself go and tried thinking how a dog might think.

I LOVE MARSHMALLOWS AS TREATS BUT YOU KNOW THAT ALREADY

[kseenaa]

This was beyond cute. X-D Really! I truly enjoyed it!

All the little details from Bills life and his youth. How lonely he was before Princess ran into his life. Literary. And brought in Gustav. Bill's and Gustav's interactions.... SO AWESOME! And Princess herself. What a wonderful voice you gave her! :-D

So much awesome for this! THANK YOU for a great read!

[melluransa]

I love Brünhilde's little voice! And thinking of all the details is the most fun part. Thanks so much for enjoying it!

[diamondairways]

What a cute story, it left a huge smile on my face! Needless to say, I loved it :)

Brünhilde's point of view was so much fun to read, that dog is so sassy at times and seems to be a perfect dog for Bill and Gustav! It's so cute how seriously she takes to commands and how much she wants to make her masters happy, aw.

Great characterizations; Bill's was really refreshing - a public defender who goes home, takes off the suit and serious face and watches Top Model - an interesting portrayal, loved it. He did the right thing in locating the dog's owner, and well, he found way more than he was looking for, haha ;)

So many great lines, this one especially really made me laugh - "Oh my dogness, I was worried I'd done wrong. Guilt started to overcome my very soul."

This was such an entertaining read, thank you so much for writing this! I really enjoyed it =D

[melluransa]

YAY! I'm glad you loved it. Thanks for reading and enjoying!

Brünhilde was really fun to write, and I love her naivety and sass. :) If you had Bill and Gustav as your masters, wouldn't you do what they say too?

Bill's character is based on someone in real life, I must admit. But really, everyone can be a different person after they get home. The person I know plays candy crush all night and tends a garden. :P People are interesting!

You know dogs -- SO sensitive to guilt. They just break down. See Denver, the guilty dog. XD

[steinsgrrl]

This was so adorable! I love the pov changes and the dog's voice, especially. Thank you so much for sharing this!

[melluransa]

Thanks! The dog's voice was the funnest part to write. :P Thank you for reading!