Paint me blue.

[thaibobye]

This is the start

Comments

[anonymous]

Thai, I really like this poem. I felt compelled to comment on it. I love the rhythm of it; a clever rhythm that just _works_ is rare and fun in a lot of poetry. Give it chords and write a song!

[applebee]

holding my breath for you today. (i don't know when it happens, so i'm not sure when to let go)
congratulations, love.