[ Player Name ] : Beth [ Personal LJ ] : heartgoesfirst [ Age ] : 23 [ Timezone ] : I always get this wrong. I'm in Scotland, so GMT? [ Other Characters ] : N/A
[ Character's Name ] : Selphie Tilmitt [ Character's Age ] : 18 [ Series ] : Name Final Fantasy VIII [ Canon Point ] : End of game.
[ Personality ] : Selphie's always considered the happy-go-lucky bouncy one of the group. She enjoys life, and tries to do so to the full no matter what scenario she's in. Selphie always fights to see the bright side, and is very much concerned in having others share her happiness. Happiness and excitement are very important to Selphie and are integral to who she is as a person, and to how she reacts in dangerous circumstances
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While the overall application is good, we would like to see an extended or another sample to better demonstrate how you plan to play Selphie in Vatheon, and particularly to better show her voice.
If you'll respond to this with your revisions, we will look them over ASAP! You have until 12/04.
(Sorry, I wasn't really sure what you wanted as a sample. I'd written something else but was scared it was wrong!)
Selphie's blog entry:
So, this morning was pretty weird. I woke with with a KILLER headache and I mean KILLER. Guess I'm kinda clumsy, but I've no idea what could've made hurt so BAD. Anyway, so I wake up all confused and rubbing my head and I'm soaking too! I mean, my dress and my hair and my boots. My skin is wet. Did I fall in the bath? With my clothes on? That's crazy, even for me.
I hate not remembering. I hate not knowing what happened. My memory seems...blank somehow. Where is everyone?
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[ Personal LJ ] : heartgoesfirst
[ Age ] : 23
[ Timezone ] : I always get this wrong. I'm in Scotland, so GMT?
[ Other Characters ] : N/A
[ Character's Name ] : Selphie Tilmitt
[ Character's Age ] : 18
[ Series ] : Name Final Fantasy VIII
[ Canon Point ] : End of game.
[ History ] :
Selphie's wiki page: http://finalfantasy.wikia.com/wiki/Selphie_Tilmitt
[ Personality ] :
Selphie's always considered the happy-go-lucky bouncy one of the group. She enjoys life, and tries to do so to the full no matter what scenario she's in. Selphie always fights to see the bright side, and is very much concerned in having others share her happiness. Happiness and excitement are very important to Selphie and are integral to who she is as a person, and to how she reacts in dangerous circumstances ( ... )
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Selphie's blog entry:
So, this morning was pretty weird. I woke with with a KILLER headache and I mean KILLER. Guess I'm kinda clumsy, but I've no idea what could've made hurt so BAD. Anyway, so I wake up all confused and rubbing my head and I'm soaking too! I mean, my dress and my hair and my boots. My skin is wet. Did I fall in the bath? With my clothes on? That's crazy, even for me.
I hate not remembering. I hate not knowing what happened. My memory seems...blank somehow. Where is everyone?
(Does that help with her voice?)
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Now that you're in the game, please follow the next few house-keeping steps.
☆ Comment here on the Taken Characters post.
☆ Comment here with your friend add information and add everyone!
☆ Join vatheon, vatheon_ooc and batheon with your character journal.
☆ Add your information here at the Player Contact page. You may need to wait a few days for the mod account to add you as a friend, due to the fact that the page is f-locked.
☆ Reread the rules and premise for a refresher.
☆ A list of permissions posts for the characters of the game can be found here. Please take a look at the posts there, and if you need a permissions post for your character, don’t forget to post a link there!
☆ Introduce yourself over at vatheon_ooc☆ Game chat is on AIM, group name vatheon. Information about it can be found on the game's ooc community ( ... )
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