[ History ] : Lily Evans' History. I'm taking her from her seventh year at Hogwarts, once she's finally caved in and started seeing James Potter. Things are starting to get darker in the wizarding world, and Voldemort is still gathering power, so Lily and her friends are secretly preparing for life after Hogwarts and are already thinking of joining the war effort.
[ Personality ] : Lily is known for being particularly kind-hearted and bright. Remus notes that she has the habit of looking at the best in people, even when they can't see it themselves. She's passionate about her studies (or perhaps one could say that she's passionate about magic) and excels at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, even becoming Head Girl in her seventh year. Others describe her as witty and charming, although, when someone crosses her or someone she loves, she is a formidable foe and is not quick to forgive. She's known for her sharp temper and tongue, clashing wits with James Potter for years before finally caving into him. Secretly, she's had
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[ Strengths/Weaknesses ] : Lily is particularly adept at potions and charms, and has a wide base of magical knowledge. She's kind and generally patient, but when her buttons are pressed, she has quite a temper, and has been known to throw a hex or two in the heat of an argument. Her ability to see the best in people might be seen as both a strength and a weakness, as it allows her to get to know people for who they are, but it also may lead her to trust people who don't deserve it. It took her many years to finally put her foot down about Severus Snape's activities in the Dark Arts, and had she been more wary of Peter, perhaps things would have turned out differently. Her fierce bravery and loyalty to her friends and family is also a double-edged sword. She can be counted on to be there for them when things get hard, but in the end, it's her willingness to sacrifice herself for those she loves that leads to her death.
[ Other Important Facts ] : If someone tries to give Lily another lily, she might scream. She's rather fond of
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While the overall application is good, we would like to see an expanded personality section. What you have is accurate, we would like to see a bit more on her character. How does she act in particular situations? Are there any situations in which she isn't as strong? Just a few questions to get you started.
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[ Personal LJ ] : faemous
[ Age ] : 25
[ Timezone ] : EST
[ Other Characters ] : N/A
[ Character's Name ] : Lily Evans
[ Character's Age ] : 17
[ Series ] : Harry Potter
[ Canon Point ] : In her seventh year at Hogwarts
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Lily Evans' History. I'm taking her from her seventh year at Hogwarts, once she's finally caved in and started seeing James Potter. Things are starting to get darker in the wizarding world, and Voldemort is still gathering power, so Lily and her friends are secretly preparing for life after Hogwarts and are already thinking of joining the war effort.
[ Personality ] :
Lily is known for being particularly kind-hearted and bright. Remus notes that she has the habit of looking at the best in people, even when they can't see it themselves. She's passionate about her studies (or perhaps one could say that she's passionate about magic) and excels at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, even becoming Head Girl in her seventh year. Others describe her as witty and charming, although, when someone crosses her or someone she loves, she is a formidable foe and is not quick to forgive. She's known for her sharp temper and tongue, clashing wits with James Potter for years before finally caving into him. Secretly, she's had ( ... )
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Lily is particularly adept at potions and charms, and has a wide base of magical knowledge. She's kind and generally patient, but when her buttons are pressed, she has quite a temper, and has been known to throw a hex or two in the heat of an argument. Her ability to see the best in people might be seen as both a strength and a weakness, as it allows her to get to know people for who they are, but it also may lead her to trust people who don't deserve it. It took her many years to finally put her foot down about Severus Snape's activities in the Dark Arts, and had she been more wary of Peter, perhaps things would have turned out differently. Her fierce bravery and loyalty to her friends and family is also a double-edged sword. She can be counted on to be there for them when things get hard, but in the end, it's her willingness to sacrifice herself for those she loves that leads to her death.
[ Other Important Facts ] :
If someone tries to give Lily another lily, she might scream. She's rather fond of ( ... )
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If you'll respond to this comment with your revisions, we'll look them over ASAP! You have until 8/7. Thank you!
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Now that you're in the game, please follow the next few house-keeping steps.
☆ Comment here: A-M or N-Z on the Taken Characters post.
☆ Comment here with your friend add information and add everyone!
☆ Join vatheon, vatheon_ooc, batheon and our dressing room starfishbucks with your character journal. Participation in Starfishbucks is not mandatory, but if you help a potential applicant voice-test, it would be much appreciated all around.
☆ Add your information here at the Player Contact page. You may need to wait a few days for the mod account to add you as a friend, due to the fact that the page is f-locked.
☆ Reread the rules and premise for a refresher.
☆ A list of permissions posts for the characters of the game can be found here. Please take a look at the posts there, and if you need a permissions post for your character, don’t forget to post a link there!
☆ Introduce yourself over at vatheon_ooc☆ Game chat is on AIM, group name vatheon. Information about it can be found on the game's ooc community ( ... )
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