While the overall application was good, we would like to see an expansion on her personality- it's very sparse, and while it elaborates on her negative aspects and her accomplishments, it lacks any mention to the other sides of her personality. What are her hopes and dreams; does she have a softer side; when and how often do certain parts of her personality come into play?
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Gaah sorry about the short personality section; in canon she’s a really minor character with almost no personality to speak of and I was nervous about including too much headcanon in the application. But regardless:
In addition to what I mentioned in the app itself, Azusa is seen as someone for ranged weapons to look up to, according to Kid’s two weapons, and as such she does try to keep herself serious for the most part. Especially considering she is probably the sanest and most normal person associated with Shibusen, other than maybe Maka. But, very occasionally, she does let her guard down, mostly only around Marie, who is probably her one friend as opposed to acquaintance. Most everyone else she keeps at arm’s length because she was bossy and self-entitled during her youth. She means well though, and while she certainly isn’t perfect - or even particularly nice at times - she does wish she had more close companions that she can rely on other than Marie, considering Marie does most of the relying in their relationship
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In addition to what I mentioned in the app itself, Azusa is seen as someone for ranged weapons to look up to, according to Kid’s two weapons, and as such she does try to keep herself serious for the most part. Especially considering she is probably the sanest and most normal person associated with Shibusen, other than maybe Maka. But, very occasionally, she does let her guard down, mostly only around Marie, who is probably her one friend as opposed to acquaintance. Most everyone else she keeps at arm’s length because she was bossy and self-entitled during her youth. She means well though, and while she certainly isn’t perfect - or even particularly nice at times - she does wish she had more close companions that she can rely on other than Marie, considering Marie does most of the relying in their relationship ( ... )
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