HELP!
So we have to write a short story in my english class, and I have no idea how to end this...I can have up to 3 pages more, but I don't know how to end it satifactorily, because I cannot finish the story within the pae limit... It's due fridays, any comments or help is GREATLY appreciated...
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I like it a lot so far, and it does seem like you should continue with it. It stops rather abruptly, and I really do want to find out how Rose adjusts to her new home! My first thought is that perhaps it could end with the naming of the baby girl or something like that. Maybe William could talk to Rose a little, make her feel more comfortable. It's a good start, and I definately think there's plenty of room to add to it.
If you want some more suggestions, I'd be glad to help. I'll be on IM for a bit still.
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